Sara Kendrick Poet Concrete

Time Is Running Out

 The Hour Fast Approaches
Time Is Running Out
Time Is Running Out
look up for your
redemption
is drawing
nigh
time
is 
run-
ning
out 
fast
God is 
your hope
hope in the Lord
Time is running out
Time is running out
The Hour Fast Approaches

Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Contest: Concrete/ Shape
This is an hour glass

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Jack Horne July 21, 2012 at 11:29 AM wow, another clever shape poem - with a powerful message too

Nette Onclaud July 20, 2012 at 10:42 AM love the rush of hours and the shape of this one, sara... solid write with winning huggs!.:)

Jonas L. Rozario July 20, 2012 at 10:25 AM Lovely...strong message & a very cool shape...think it's a winner already!!!

Cory Long July 20, 2012 at 6:15 AM nice job! good luck in the contest.. cory

Jancarl Campi July 20, 2012 at 12:41 AM Enjoy the read. May you do well in the contest. Thanks for reading my work. Jancarl

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2012 at 4:57 PM Cool way to do this contest. Maybe I can figure it out somehow!!

Russell Sivey July 19, 2012 at 4:25 PM This is an extremely awesome concrete poem my friend! I'm really excited to see you place real high in this contest! You have done masterfully with this write Sara! What a superior poem, filled with a tremendous message! Great Work!!

Kim Merryman July 19, 2012 at 4:24 PM This is wonderful, Sara. The message is so necessary and is clear in your poem and the shape makes it look so cool! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim