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time is a blob a slippery amorphic thing that we trust to be malleable yet slips through your fingers when we least expect it one moment time seems manageable the next it's rambunctious and chaotic it's like our two-year old toddler that mustn't stay unsupervised still everyone has the same twenty four hours unless we decide to harness their power elusive time will be squandered it's only what we set as priority that actually gets done AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Posted on March 26, 2025

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Date: 3/26/2025 10:03:00 PM
OK, granted. But is time 'a friend?'
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2025 5:32:00 AM
Sure beats a dead battery in the clock ~ lol

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