Notes About The Poem

Time is not the enemy

time is a blob
a slippery amorphic thing
that we trust to be malleable
yet slips through your fingers
when we least expect it

one moment time seems manageable
the next it's rambunctious and chaotic
it's like our two-year old toddler
that mustn't stay unsupervised

still everyone has the same twenty four hours
unless we decide to harness their power
elusive time will be squandered
it's only what we set as priority
that actually gets done


AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:03 PM
OK, granted. But is time 'a friend?'
Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 5:32 AM
Sure beats a dead battery in the clock ~ lol
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