Time Is Elementary

The only reason for time
is so that everything
doesn’t happen at once

Albert Einstein

TIME IS ELEMENTARY

swatches of bands, smart
time is elementary;
strapped snug, cosseted
on a small-pale wrist.

coffee fumes and coal
chugging on life’s track.
cuckoo bird on half
and every hour —
oh, why’d it have to stop?!
(salvation in Grandma’s coffee cake)

polaroid portions collecting dust;
ink-streaked down
memory’s bust.

ironic how i can’t remember
the ding-dong digital or sundial
in our own home —
clocks have a mind of their own
busy with keeping its children,
well swept, wound
and educated.

6/29/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/2/2019 11:06:00 AM
Merci pour vos commentaires, Kim, ils sont toujours appréciés. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2019 11:59:00 AM
De rien, monsieur!
Date: 6/29/2019 9:21:00 PM
This part was amazingly clever and wise: " coffee fumes and coal chugging on life’s track. cuckoo bird on half and every hour — oh, why’d it have to stop?! (salvation in Grandma’s coffee cake)" That would have been a great poem in itself, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2019 9:33:00 PM
Hugs, Caren! Thank you!
Date: 6/29/2019 4:42:00 PM
cofcof...i ah...um...i dare to take note with the 'official' wording of the einstein quote... time does not exist to prevent everything from happening at once; it is as the other way round... nature is: things do not happen all at once...we count 'things', and call it clock time
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2019 4:44:00 PM
Thanks, Sand!
Date: 6/29/2019 9:51:00 AM
Albert Einstein - the cleverest man in the world - time is elementary and nothing happens all at once, one can say that is why evolution is what it is. Great write Kim. Well penned. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2019 9:54:00 AM
Thanks, Jennifer! Squeezy hug...Kim
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