Time Is a Swimsuit

Time is a swimsuit
        ere a dip in the ocean

      Never make use of it
        ~ for putting on lotion
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George Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 10:32 PM
Your comparison of time to a swim suit is interesting ! Great rhyming Gershon !
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 8:44 PM
Kind of quirky too: Time = Swimsuit. ~ Sands Slipping Away
Proxenos Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 8:36 AM
Ha ha ha. Elias had an acquaintance in Rotary Who joined a small committee holiday, At the Kruger Park it is unbearably hot, This individual put on a speedo,we laughed a lot. He bombed into the pool Looked naked when he got out, such a fool, His wife forgot to put suncream on his bum, could not sit on at barbeque as at midday, he was face down in the sun.
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Without sun-cream, life sure is no dream! Thanks for the cute narrative, Jennifer.
Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 11:22 AM
I like this one, gw. I wish "for" was "before," however. But, you wrote the poem, I didn't. You make a good case for sunscreen!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Hello Gershon, I like this poem. Will be my fav. I like the line Time is a swimsuit. Enjoy your day my friend.
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