Time Is a Swimsuit

Time is a swimsuit ere a dip in the ocean Never make use of it ~ for putting on lotion

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Valsa George

Date: 6/3/2022 10:32:00 PM

Your comparison of time to a swim suit is interesting ! Great rhyming Gershon !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/6/2022 8:44:00 PM

Kind of quirky too: Time = Swimsuit. ~ Sands Slipping Away

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/3/2022 8:36:00 AM

Ha ha ha. Elias had an acquaintance in Rotary Who joined a small committee holiday, At the Kruger Park it is unbearably hot, This individual put on a speedo,we laughed a lot. He bombed into the pool Looked naked when he got out, such a fool, His wife forgot to put suncream on his bum, could not sit on at barbeque as at midday, he was face down in the sun.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/6/2022 8:45:00 PM

Without sun-cream, life sure is no dream! Thanks for the cute narrative, Jennifer.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/2/2022 11:22:00 AM

I like this one, gw. I wish "for" was "before," however. But, you wrote the poem, I didn't. You make a good case for sunscreen!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/2/2022 11:04:00 AM

Hello Gershon, I like this poem. Will be my fav. I like the line Time is a swimsuit. Enjoy your day my friend.