Time Intrepid

The never ending journey
It can take you anywhere
Name it and you're there 

As two hearts melt into one 
It's an explosion of passion
Seeping out to light the night
Lusting hearts coming together

Emotions held captive within 
Candles burning brightly now 
Shades of midnight blue
Light up the purple skies 
Desperate hands touching

Tender is the night we touch
Lying within each other's arms
A thousand eyes watching us 

As shadows fly across the sky 
Some are passed, some still survive 
Make my way down the chamber of love
I hear such sweet moaning from above 

Hands touching flesh to flesh as 
The scent of us mingle in the air 
Flashes of the cosmos floating thru
The infinite wisdom surrounding us
I like it this way as we touch ~ yes 
This is the way I'd like us to  stay 

You take me there where I want to be 
there is no time or space with us  as  
Love's passions receive their message  
And we drift away on clouds of lust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 10, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Wow, that was intense. Awesome! I loved it! Nice job!
Duncan Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 1:30 AM
Thank you Ashley.
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February 18, 2013 at 10:04 PM
oooh la la. a passionate one from you. SO NICE. This was a great one to discover!!
Duncan Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 11:24 PM
Thank you Andrea ;}
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 10:03 PM
oh good, there are older poems of yours I have not seen, so let me check out this one!!
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 2:38 AM
the heat of passion lasts awhile, enough until we get to smile, all entitled to our ration, for love comes into fashion, just maybe for the just ...
Duncan Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Thank you for reading Don ;}
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November 27, 2012 at 7:30 AM
Some times us guys are a bit dense, sorry things didn't work out. Fantastic poem though. You have skill relaying your passion with words. I liked your stars as eyes metaphor. Well done. One spelling error sent should be scent.
Duncan Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 6:20 PM
Thank you Richard,,,, together 17 years ,,, so I have a lot of writing material ;} thanks for reading,,, have a great day ;}
Guzzi Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 6:14 PM
Love sure is inspiring aye! Light & Love
Duncan Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 7:34 PM
This was written about my X ,, we were together for 17 years ,,,, nothing stays the same. thank you for reading Debbie ;}
Harrington Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 12:27 PM
Love under a midnight sky! fav. line~a thousand eyes watching us. Enjoyed greatly. :) Tanya
Duncan Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:28 PM
Thank you Tanya,,,, I wrote this with my X in mind. We were together " 17 " years, he wrote for me as well. we parted on good terms.
Johnson Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 8:03 PM
coming together with the blest, where angels float, with sweet caress, when you are not being a pest, timeless love you know it...
Duncan Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 8:12 PM
yup,,, timeless love ;} thank you for reading ;} I hope you are happy and smiling !
Clark Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 9:56 AM
Wow this poem is so powerful. Brings out such amazing emotions. great job
Austin Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 2:55 PM
Quick! Call my doctor! My pacemaker just exploded! I like this poem muchissimo! Love, daver
Duncan Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 9:10 PM
I hear the doc coming now ;} thank you !
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February 9, 2012 at 2:18 AM
Debbie you written good,sweet and soft poem I enjoy it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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