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Time in Hawaii

A month in Hawaii, ah, what a luxury to share Revel in the warming sun and walk a sandy beach Fresh warm breeze and coconut in the salty air Every day is marvelous, comfort never out of reach Hiking through lush green forest with fruit hung all around Or on the mountain top you see way out upon the sea The fish an artist’s pallet with colors they abound To spend a month in Hawaii, ah, that’s the treat for me 1/29/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/20/2015 4:00:00 PM
John.. Delightful write and win!
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Date: 2/18/2015 9:51:00 PM
Nice win...PD
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:44:00 PM
John, CONGRATULATIONS, in Shadow's indulgence contest! -LUV- SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2015 2:33:00 PM
oh sounds simply wonderful - many congrats :-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2015 10:05:00 AM
Congrats John. Love
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:29:00 AM
Sounds great, I live on the west coast but have still not made it to Hawaii. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/11/2015 6:26:00 AM
my kind of indulgence too John congrats on placing hugs
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