Time In Hawaii

A month in Hawaii, ah, what a luxury to share
Revel in the warming sun and walk a sandy beach
Fresh warm breeze and coconut in the salty air
Every day is marvelous, comfort never out of reach
Hiking through lush green forest with fruit hung all around
Or on the mountain top you see way out upon the sea
The fish an artist’s pallet with colors they abound
To spend a month in Hawaii, ah, that’s the treat for me

1/29/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:51 PM
Nice win...PD
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 11:44 PM
John, CONGRATULATIONS, in Shadow's indulgence contest! -LUV- SKAT
Allison Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 2:33 PM
oh sounds simply wonderful - many congrats :-) Hugs jan xx
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Congrats John. Love
Lamoureux Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Sounds great, I live on the west coast but have still not made it to Hawaii. Congrats on your win.
Hamilton Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 6:26 AM
my kind of indulgence too John congrats on placing hugs
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