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TIME IN A BOTTLE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
T - Tears of memories, forever sealed as planned I - Inscrutable hours, slipping away like grains of sand M - Moments frozen in time, like a photograph's gaze E - Echoes of laughter, whispers of love's sweet praise I - In the depths of my soul, a story unfurls N - Notes of nostalgia, murmurs from the past start to swirl A - Amidst the silence, memories begin to unfold B - Bottled up emotions, aching to make some noise O - Oceans of tears, skies of blue, and rivers of joy T - Tides of time washing over me all day long T - Timeless moments, like a treasured song L - Lost and found in the depths of this bottle so fair E – Ephemeral dreams suspended in this glass sphere

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Date: 8/5/2025 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful Acrostic poetry, Sara. Someone is going to get quite the surprise when they find that bottle. Your poetry amazes me. I am blessed to have you as my wife. My vows to you are eternal, my dear friend. Bill the Bard
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/5/2025 4:42:00 PM
Bill the Bard: your comment is so clever. thanks for being my grand encouraging and confidant. Blessed to be your wife and to share life with you. Am I a bardess? Ha
Date: 8/5/2025 5:50:00 AM
- So beautifully described, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/5/2025 4:41:00 PM
thank you, dear Anne-Lise...hugs for the evening, Sara
Date: 8/5/2025 4:28:00 AM
Dear Sara,absolutely beautiful… the way each letter builds into a tender mosaic of memory and emotion is just exquisite. It reads like a slow exhale of feeling—grief, joy, nostalgia—all bottled up in a poetic time capsule...Hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/5/2025 4:41:00 PM
dear Maria--even your comments are beautifully poetic. I so appreciate your sincerity and your kind and insightful comments. You're awesome....hugs, Sara
Date: 8/5/2025 4:03:00 AM
Very nice Acrostic, Sara. Well done! This is also my wife's favorite song :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/5/2025 4:40:00 PM
thanks for your visit, kind sir. I appreciate your encouraging comments. The song was my mom's favorite. Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara

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