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Time Honored River

Sunsets golden rays burst through peaks displaying the time honored river.




for Rick's contest
6-1-11

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Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2011 at 9:00 AM

Thank you Phyllis.. you are so wonderful...always,..p.d.

Akash Yadav

August 26, 2011 at 1:25 PM

a fine imagery...:)..great job Phyl

Judy Ball

July 16, 2011 at 7:08 PM

I love rivers and streams. Very nice imagery here. God Bless, JB

Zzzzz Zzzzz

June 21, 2011 at 4:32 AM

Poetic and cinematic! Well done!

June 14, 2011 at 1:34 PM

Wonderful use of imagery! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Poet Destroyer A

June 12, 2011 at 4:04 PM

Congratulations, Phyllis! I love the way beauty reflects off the river you display here. honored rays peaking through... enjoyed,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 9, 2011 at 12:37 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Phyllis. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

June 6, 2011 at 11:29 AM

What a glorious interpretation of the photo, Phyllis. Missed so much while I was on vacation but am glad I had the chance to read this inspiring poem now. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2011 at 8:25 PM

Glad to see you on the winner's list, dear. This was a great depiction of that river and sunset.

Sara Kendrick

June 5, 2011 at 5:58 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara

James Peranteau

June 4, 2011 at 3:11 PM

This dear poet, IS a Monoku, and a fine flowing message at that ! I enjoyed this write Phyllis ! Have a beautiful weekend...much love, james

Jack Horne

June 3, 2011 at 11:43 PM

Congratulations on your win : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 3, 2011 at 8:36 PM

Congrats Phyl on your super win with this creative entry for Rick.. well done my friend..luv.

Stephan McBride

June 3, 2011 at 5:30 PM

beautiful makes you want to be there

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 2, 2011 at 12:00 PM

this is beautiful Phyl! I really like how you put a spotlight on that river through the sun rays :) hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

June 1, 2011 at 10:03 PM

I'm so glad to see you posting this little poem, Phyllis.YOu captured the essence of that picture. The river was truly time honored!

Constance La France

June 1, 2011 at 3:04 PM

A beautiful monoku Phyllis for rick's contest, I hope you do well with this poem, now in regards to your blog today about how much we write, well, for me I am always writing, I have a journal I carry with me at all times, it is full of poems and fragments and thoughts and ideas that eventually become poetry.. and like you lots of papers are scattered hither and tither in my nest~~

James Foulk

June 1, 2011 at 12:58 PM

loved this wonderful and beautiful piece you wrote, good luck in contest.

Time Honored River

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