Time Heals

Feelings weigh like heavy snow
random thoughts come and go
some move fast others slow
regrets linger in the soul
emotions rise to surface
other remain buried below
waiting for them to thaw
as we drift life's pathway
winter dissipates 
spring a renewal of things
time is a great healer
for winter's broken soul.

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Date: 4/6/2024 6:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/6/2024 4:01:00 PM
Thank your for your comment and yes whoever believes will have everlasting life. Have a blessed weekend. love phyl
Date: 3/20/2024 10:52:00 AM
"Time Heals" is a wonderful write/so true. Love how you used winter/snow vs spring/renewal... Have a wonderful day writing away.................
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Date: 4/6/2024 3:53:00 PM
Thanks Paula for your comment. Glad to see spring on the way and the lifting of winter. love phyl
Date: 3/18/2024 9:48:00 AM
You are absolutely right, Phyllis! Time heals all wounds! God bless! -Smita
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/6/2024 3:48:00 PM
Thank you for your comment and yes time heals. love phyl
Date: 3/17/2024 7:16:00 PM
Your lines especially touched as memories and memontos may not fade, but we might learn to live with pain. Still Spring is on the way with optimum light to illuminate the barren vistas
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/6/2024 3:44:00 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem. love phyl
Date: 3/13/2024 1:23:00 PM
- Spring will bring sunshine ... and the path easier to walk, dear Phyllis :) - The memories will always be with you ... a lovely poem :) - hugs
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/6/2024 3:43:00 PM
Thanks for your comment and so true memories will always be with us. love phyl
Date: 3/13/2024 11:15:00 AM
So true and beautifully said really. I love the way youv started the poem with “ Feelings weigh like heavy snow“ so deeply moving. “ regrets linger in the soul emotions rise to surface other remain buried below waiting for them to thaw“ i think many can resonate with your words, as sometimes we all do have these emotions, weighing heavy waiting for spring, to renew and thaw icy emotions. Pleasure reading this dear phyllis . Sending you light
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/13/2024 1:03:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. We ride the emotional roller coaster in life and times where you feel the weight of it . God bless. phyl
Date: 3/13/2024 10:57:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem Phyl…..sad then inspirational with springs renewal! Debx
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/13/2024 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Deb time does heal but we do not forget. There are days but try not to dwell on them. love phyl
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