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Time Has Not Changed My Circumstance

I bled a river of crimson red for many years, It's said with time one's broken heart will heal. My great love leaving me was one of my fears, I bled a river of crimson red for many years. We had a love, filled with much passion and zeal. He left, heart is still raw, I've shed a lot of tears; I bled a river of crimson red for many years, It's said with time one's broken heart will heal. 02/25/2022 Contest: Some Broken Hearts Never Mend Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

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Date: 3/1/2022 9:28:00 AM
I am so sorry for your sadness dear friend, but you have come through a very difficult time of your life as a wonderful poetess, with a kind soul and strong spirit. Best of luck for the contest Alexis. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/25/2022 11:53:00 AM
Hi Alexis. You have written an excellent and touchingly sad triolet. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn
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Date: 2/25/2022 10:54:00 AM
Articulation empowers meaningfully, and the fortitude, whereto, it resonates, proffers a hope-filled resolution, Alexis, much enjoyed, Aloha~William!
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Date: 2/25/2022 8:45:00 AM
Alexis, I felt so sad for you when I read this marvelous triolet. It is so well-constructed and touches the heart. Such a fine choice of form for the theme. Best of luck in Faraz's contest.
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Date: 2/25/2022 8:24:00 AM
On mark for this poignant theme, Alexis. Beautifully articulated rhymes. A splendid write.
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Date: 2/25/2022 8:00:00 AM
Time is said to be a healer ! But some wounds never heal. They continue bleeding at the slightest jerk ! Fine entry for the contest. Best of luck !
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Date: 2/25/2022 7:46:00 AM
I can feel the loss in your words Alexis! I really think that you captured the spirit of the contest, no matter what " they say" sometimes, we just have to live with it! Hope today is good, happy Friday xxoo
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Date: 2/25/2022 6:27:00 AM
Hi Alexis…I love your poem but I’m sorry for your sadness….not nice for you. Debx
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