Alexis Y. Poet Triolet

Time Has Not Changed My Circumstance

I bled a river of crimson red for many years,
It's said with time one's broken heart will heal.
My great love leaving me was one of my fears,
I bled a river of crimson red for many years.
We had a love, filled with much passion and zeal.
He left, heart is still raw, I've shed a lot of tears;
I bled a river of crimson red for many years,
It's said with time one's broken heart will heal.













02/25/2022
Contest: Some Broken Hearts Never Mend
Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

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Jennifer Proxenos March 1, 2022 at 9:28 AM I am so sorry for your sadness dear friend, but you have come through a very difficult time of your life as a wonderful poetess, with a kind soul and strong spirit. Best of luck for the contest Alexis. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 25, 2022 at 11:53 AM Hi Alexis. You have written an excellent and touchingly sad triolet. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn

William Kelii Kekaula February 25, 2022 at 10:54 AM Articulation empowers meaningfully, and the fortitude, whereto, it resonates, proffers a hope-filled resolution, Alexis, much enjoyed, Aloha~William!

L Milton Hankins February 25, 2022 at 8:45 AM Alexis, I felt so sad for you when I read this marvelous triolet. It is so well-constructed and touches the heart. Such a fine choice of form for the theme. Best of luck in Faraz's contest.

Vijay Pandit February 25, 2022 at 8:24 AM On mark for this poignant theme, Alexis. Beautifully articulated rhymes. A splendid write.

Valsa George February 25, 2022 at 8:00 AM Time is said to be a healer ! But some wounds never heal. They continue bleeding at the slightest jerk ! Fine entry for the contest. Best of luck !

Mike Gentile February 25, 2022 at 7:46 AM I can feel the loss in your words Alexis! I really think that you captured the spirit of the contest, no matter what " they say" sometimes, we just have to live with it! Hope today is good, happy Friday xxoo

Deb M February 25, 2022 at 6:27 AM Hi Alexis…I love your poem but I’m sorry for your sadness….not nice for you. Debx