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Time For Shower-Play-- Or

Mild is the tempo of late noon shower, which eases hot July always aglow beguiled, youngsters rove outside for an hour-- pitch of voice chiming about trickled flow wild their plays jaunty on a green bower : Switch! The view changes as fine droplets go riled, kids watch the glare upon sun's tower— Downhill, naughty tales of brief games remain Till moist faces bear each caper … through rain. 6/27/2019 Contest of Charles messina : Rima Ottava
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Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 9:21 PM
I second Jennifer's comment below (drop down). Your poetry, this poem -- wondrous gifts to us, your readers, on Poetry Soup. Thank you! Warm wishes, Gershon
Messina Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 2:38 PM
There's always time for a quick refreshing summer shower Nette, even if it is outdoors (lol) Great entry...congratulations on your win in my contest hugs // Charlie :)
Gondolf Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 1:11 PM
I just love a soft summer shower. Congrats on your win, Nette. All my best. Hugs, John
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 10:27 AM
Rain is so welcome in summer heat. Your lovely poem embraces its beauty Nette. A lovely entry for the contest! : ) xxoo
Peranteau Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Thus always shall i remain the child! Sweet write dear poet...may you bask in the July rains, well, here we are about to be engulfed within the drops.. shortly..this week! Have a splendid Summer Nette! Much love, james
Sergi Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 10:27 AM
Truly the love of rain! My compliments , nette!
Horsman Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Beautiful poetry nette, as always
Proxenos Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Ottava Rima Poetry - don't think I could ever do it - simply amazing Nette, you and your poems are a gift to Poetry Soup. Best of luck. Hugs, Jennifer.
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 3:18 PM
A very picturesque piece. And one that presents imagery of youth, play and youthful life as inspiring and beautifully innocent at times... A gleaming gem.. A fav...
Adams Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 12:46 PM
your pen always displays such beautiful imagery....lovely poem Nette :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Beautifully done, Nette..you have that photo in your words. All the best.
Cunningham Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 1:56 AM
Puddles and rain attracts children, the bigger the puddle the better. Good luck. Tom
Hinshaw Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 8:36 PM
Another great entry and top winner for the contest, nette! Best o' luck - Bob H
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