Lin Lane Poet Footle

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Time passes much too quickly


HURRY UP AND GET DRESSED:
just wait
too late


I CAN'T SLEEP:
my clock
tick tock


I DON'T FEEL LIKE DOING ANYTHING:
waste time
a crime


I'M SO BEAUTIFUL:
won't last
age fast


WE'LL BE TOGETHER FOREVER:
goodbyes
love dies


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3-1-2016 . Footle Contest
     by:Timothy Hicks

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Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2016 at 7:26 PM LOVE yours!!! Congrats to you on a job well done. Lin Lane March 13, 2016 at 7:57 PM Thank you.

Jan Allison March 11, 2016 at 4:09 PM very clever string of footles Lin congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane March 13, 2016 at 7:56 PM Thanks, Jan.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 11, 2016 at 2:17 AM Wow Lin brilliant take .. congrats on great win. Lin Lane March 11, 2016 at 3:54 AM I appreciate your congrats, Upma. Thanks.

Susan Gentry March 11, 2016 at 1:59 AM Congratulations on your win! Excellent! Lin Lane March 11, 2016 at 3:54 AM Thanks so very much, Susan.

Probir Gupta March 10, 2016 at 11:15 PM Wonderfully witty.... Lin Lane March 11, 2016 at 3:53 AM Thank you, Probir.

Eve Roper March 10, 2016 at 9:22 PM Great job congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Lin Lane March 11, 2016 at 3:53 AM Thanks for the congrats and the hugs, Eve ;)

Sam Jameson March 10, 2016 at 8:31 PM Nicely written, Lin-- the layout of these is great, squeezed the whole story out of each set. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, very well done! Lin Lane March 10, 2016 at 10:01 PM Thank you, Sam, and congratulations to you as well.

Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 8:03 PM Lovely Lin! Congrats on your placement in the footle contest! Amazing footle :)-luloo *smiles* Lin Lane March 10, 2016 at 10:00 PM Thanks, Luloo.

Timothy Hicks March 10, 2016 at 7:58 PM Congratulations on your high place win, Lin! These were, dare I say, "timeless". I loved how each of your titles were "expectations", while the rhymes were the let downs, when faced with reality. Lin Lane March 10, 2016 at 10:00 PM Thanks, Tim.

Casarah Nance March 2, 2016 at 8:50 AM Very good footles! Lin Lane March 7, 2016 at 6:09 PM Thanks, Cas.

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2016 at 3:53 PM great tie in with theme of time. Nice ones! Lin Lane March 1, 2016 at 6:44 PM Thanks so much, Andrea. I had no idea what I was doing, but it sounded right to me. ;)