Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Time For An Eye Exam

Sure having more trouble driving at night
The oncoming headlights seem much too bright
Should check it out
A good idea no doubt
An eye exam might explain the reason for my plight


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal December 31, 2015 at 9:46 PM Its awesome that youre still driving Jack :) Stay safe and healthy! Love always, Laura Jack Ellison January 2, 2016 at 8:56 AM Look out!!!! Here comes that old guy!!! LOL Lovesies, Jacko xox

Carol Eastman December 29, 2015 at 1:28 PM Understand completely! Hubby has diabetes and night blindness... I now have to turn the light up higher to read with my old lady reading glasses... And we're 63! LOL... Oh Well... Such is life... Jack Ellison January 2, 2016 at 8:55 AM Wait! It doesn't get better! LOL Love, Jack xoxox

Tim Smith December 27, 2015 at 12:23 PM It all gets blurry when driving at night...just get a young honey and treat her right...she can drive....keeping you alive...leaving time for squishy things to see with your sight.... Jack Ellison December 27, 2015 at 5:34 PM Good idea... could justify it by calling her a chauffeur! LOL

Jan Allison December 27, 2015 at 10:05 AM I'm having mine tested on Tuesday lol:-) hugs jan xx Jack Ellison December 27, 2015 at 5:33 PM Good luck... you'll do fine! Love, Jack xoxox

Judy Konos December 27, 2015 at 9:27 AM We all need eye exams at age 50 Jack and the beat goes on.... Jack Ellison December 27, 2015 at 9:34 AM Still driving at 80... outta my way!!! Love from the north xxx

Jean Murray December 27, 2015 at 7:46 AM Well done. I am useless at Limericks. Jean Murray December 27, 2015 at 12:03 PM Now I have changed the title to MILLY. Jean Murray December 27, 2015 at 11:46 AM I see...this means I must use the word willie..... in MIDWIFE. Thank you Jack Jack Ellison December 27, 2015 at 8:21 AM They're easy... keep trying! Remember lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme and 3 and 4 rhyme and are shorter! There you have it... I'll be waiting! Jack Ellison December 27, 2015 at 8:18 AM Methinks an eye exam is order! Age... bah humbug!!! xoxox