Time For a Walk

The sun hung low in the sky
And the light was beginning to fade
Maggie the Schnoodle and Jack the Retriever
Stood before me 
Tails wagging
Noses pointing to leashes
Looking expectantly
Tapping their toe/paw 
Checking the clock
Clearly reminding me
It was now time for their daily walk.

Okay, I promised. We'll go after I do just one more thing.
I’ll just check my email, oh and just search Google on that one thing I heard about...
Oh look there, well I wonder if anyone’s done any research on that, let’s see...
Well, hmmm, are there any blogs with opinions on the matter, let’s see…
Ah ha! I must bookmark this page and come back to it,
For I must take the dogs out before it gets dar………………k?

How can it be? Where did the sun go? 
Why, only a moment ago there was plenty of light.
Alright Jack, let's go Maggie …how 'bout a walk by the light of the moon?




Inspired by Laura McKenzi's "Beyond (an un-named time that follows day)fall" contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Santaniello Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Hi Linda, even with our differences you did do me a kindness by directing me to poetrysouy. Thank you carmine
Culverhouse Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 2:01 PM
so many times the computer takes up alot of time and gets nothing accomplished except loosely used, entertainment.
Byrne Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 10:09 PM
Very refreshing style!
Dufresne Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:36 PM
I enjoyed your free verse reality conversation with the pups. Marvelous time keepers. And it is strange how the clock in our own mind seems to stop while the world's time continues. Someone told me that is the side of the brain art emanates from and that side knows no time. So many things to think about. ...Like your comments..Interesting though I must reread them several more times . Linda Witt-King, thank you and I certainly enjoy reading your poetry and am happy to see it here. -Robert
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 4:45 PM
An amazing write Linda and I know this contest is over .. u should have won a spot on the winners list as this is something we all can relate to.. thankxxx for your uplifting and special comments on my poetry today and my blog .. u might enjoy reading my Finger Frenzy poem.. its almost the same as this one but it was totally written for humor value.. hope u enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie
Bono Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Please check out Linda maries new blog It is a fun thing to do.you have to comment on it.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 3:12 AM
Thank you, Linda, for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Whether in Your Neck of the Woods” blog. Remember to walk your dog! Smiles, Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 9:18 PM
Ahhh, how sweet, you took them anyway, though it was late. Good one! andrea
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 9:18 PM
Hey, did this not win? Gosh, I thought it was really great!
Haick Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 10:37 PM
Already a winner, in my book, Linda!! Great job. I love it. Goes to my favs. Peace, Audrey
Bono Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 7:48 PM
Definetly a winner.It feels refreshing to take your faithful member for a walk.Hope all is well.
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