Time For a Vacation

TIME FOR A VACATION

It is my wife’s lifelong dream, a fairytale place a magic land :
The  small village of Rye  in Sussex , in southern England.

This is the heart of England, its bosom  - 
Filled with peaceful smells of blossom :
Like a Dickens scene on christmas cards  -
Steep streets  with cobblestones  -   no cars.

Smoking chimneys,   bow windows, roofs with thatches,
Hanging  baskets of alyssum and lobelia in batches  -
Her favorite colours  white and dark blue:
I wanted to make her dream come true.

Tea and hot crumpets and warm butter oozing
By the fire in the sitting room with  grandad snoozing
At four o’ clock by the chimes of the  grandfather 
Clock which  fascinates  -  it’s like theatre to her.

Soft  beds you sink into deeper and deeper;
Little bedrooms with floral wallpaper
She’s only seen in movies about Sherlock Holmes; 
And small windows recalling  our childhood homes.

We feel at ease,  content like birds flown home  to their loft.
View to  cherry orchard trees in blossom soft
And to  France on the distant sea horizon:
She gazes and thinks and  daydreams  on and on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 12:17 PM
I have heard of it, and you make it sound so quaint and lovely. A very well deserved win and thanks for catching my typo for me.
George   Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 4:09 AM
You have painted such a beautiful, vivid picture with this Winning entry, Sydney. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 7:47 PM
makes me remember my 2 -month long trip that stretched from spain, portugal, amserdam to prague and all... a visual delight, syd with happy congrats for the wowie win! :) huggs
Freeman Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 6:17 PM
Sydney, Great to see you poem's success in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your honored poem's place. Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Congrats on your win, Syd. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Congrats Syd on your fantastic win in the vacation contest with this fine adventure.. enjoy another win with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 1:04 PM
So happy to see your terrific poem in the winners' circle, Syd. Congratulations! Now get ye to Sussex and tell us how the trip went. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Sydney
Brown Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations Syd on your 8th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 5:38 PM
I sure would love to see such a quint village as Rye, Sydney. It would be like walking into a fairyland. The soft beds, tea and crumpets, grandfather clocks...what a special vacation! Your wife has the right idea. Start planning your trip! Love, Carolyn
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 10:22 AM
Brilliant, I've been to Rye it small and very traditional. Thanks for the comment. you had me woried for a moment when I saw Syd writing to Sid. I thought me split personality was trying to confuse me.
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