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Time Falls

Time falls, a silent prey
When calls your love to play

Eileen Manassian
For Nette's Onclaud's Essence Contest
October 12, 2014

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/19/2014 11:36:00 AM

mellow, mellow and so impactful, Eileen.. thanks for making my contest a special one.. congrats!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/18/2014 1:52:00 AM

Wow sweet Eileen! U hv an amazing pen dear! So much said in just two lines, congrats on big win!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/17/2014 1:36:00 PM

It seems I missed this gem, congratulations Eileen.

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/16/2014 8:30:00 PM

Love does denude the demands of Time, yet love also undulates with urgency to have and hold what is fine...I love the spirit in this poetry Eileen...J.A.B.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/15/2014 7:35:00 PM

wonderful lines Eileen congrats on win hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2014 4:02:00 PM

Good one, Eileen. So good to see you on the list, and congratulations.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/15/2014 12:38:00 PM

If it does not win,it is never yours;congrats Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 1:10:00 PM

Thanks ever so much for this sweet post.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/15/2014 11:44:00 AM

Nice romantic expression, Eileen, congrats on the win

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 11:46:00 AM

Thank you, Dr Ram. Good to have your visit.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/15/2014 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations Eileen! Another worthy win. Time is often a romantic accomplice, whether intentionally or not. // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 11:48:00 AM

:) Lovely to have your visit, Paul. Hugs....Be very intentional about visiting me! ;)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/15/2014 11:01:00 AM

You found romance in this challenge good for you. Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 11:22:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Maurice. So glad to have a visit from you. Hugs! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2014 10:00:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Eileen :-) hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 11:22:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Jan. :) Hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/15/2014 8:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Eileen. Nice one.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 11:23:00 AM

Your visit is welcome, Brenda. Thank you! :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/15/2014 8:19:00 AM

Congrats Eileen... Beautiful... Hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 11:22:00 AM

Thanks, Tim...I appreciate the visit!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/13/2014 9:26:00 PM

I sent you some soup! Hugs!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 4:56:00 AM

I didn't receive it!! PLEASE RESEND!!!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/13/2014 9:22:00 PM

I sent you soup mail!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2014 4:56:00 AM

Got it! Thanks a bunch!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/13/2014 4:49:00 PM

Packs a punch for being so short. Fantastic minimalism, Eileen. I commented on your I Taste Summer btw... sorry again for my long absence! I see I have a lot to catch up on...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2014 9:02:00 PM

I can't tell you how happy I am to "see" you here!!! I have missed you SO SO much! I've wondered where you'd gone off to. NOT A WORD, Timothy!!! I was actually worried. OK...I'm done with the little speech and am ready to welcome you back with a hug! :) :) :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/12/2014 12:39:00 PM

Your arrow has hit the target dead on! A 7, dear Eileen!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2014 7:09:00 AM

I love it when my arrow hits the mark, my dear poet! You honor me! As always...a seven from you is heaven!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/12/2014 10:59:00 AM

How wonderful...perfectly describes the moment....hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2014 7:09:00 AM

:) Thanks, Tim. You must have experience such moments to know! ;) Thanks for passing by. Always welcome.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 10:12:00 AM

wow eileen this is awesome love the rhyme and theme in this little gem. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2014 7:12:00 AM

Thanks, my sweetie pie! I love your post. That WOW does my heart good.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/12/2014 10:10:00 AM

Yet love's ardor, sends a rebound as more sweet time is found! Essence of your words brought that inspiration to my mind instantly. Great contest entry, good luck my friend..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2014 7:12:00 AM

YOU should join the contest, my dear. Look how you just spin it out like that. :) Thanks for the lovely visit and post.