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Time Falls

Time falls, a silent prey
When calls your love to play

Eileen Manassian
For Nette's Onclaud's Essence Contest
October 12, 2014

Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2014

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October 19, 2014 at 11:36 AM

mellow, mellow and so impactful, Eileen.. thanks for making my contest a special one.. congrats!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 18, 2014 at 1:52 AM

Wow sweet Eileen! U hv an amazing pen dear! So much said in just two lines, congrats on big win!

Richard Lamoureux

October 17, 2014 at 1:36 PM

It seems I missed this gem, congratulations Eileen.

October 16, 2014 at 8:30 PM

Love does denude the demands of Time, yet love also undulates with urgency to have and hold what is fine...I love the spirit in this poetry Eileen...J.A.B.

Shadow Hamilton

October 15, 2014 at 7:35 PM

wonderful lines Eileen congrats on win hugs

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2014 at 4:02 PM

Good one, Eileen. So good to see you on the list, and congratulations.

October 15, 2014 at 12:38 PM

If it does not win,it is never yours;congrats Eileen.

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 1:10 PM

Thanks ever so much for this sweet post.

October 15, 2014 at 11:44 AM

Nice romantic expression, Eileen, congrats on the win

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 11:46 AM

Thank you, Dr Ram. Good to have your visit.

October 15, 2014 at 11:29 AM

Congratulations Eileen! Another worthy win. Time is often a romantic accomplice, whether intentionally or not. // paul

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 11:48 AM

:) Lovely to have your visit, Paul. Hugs....Be very intentional about visiting me! ;)

October 15, 2014 at 11:01 AM

You found romance in this challenge good for you. Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 11:22 AM

Thanks ever so much, Maurice. So glad to have a visit from you. Hugs! :)

October 15, 2014 at 10:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Eileen :-) hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 11:22 AM

Thanks ever so much, Jan. :) Hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans

October 15, 2014 at 8:24 AM

Congratulations on your win Eileen. Nice one.

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 11:23 AM

Your visit is welcome, Brenda. Thank you! :)

October 15, 2014 at 8:19 AM

Congrats Eileen... Beautiful... Hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 11:22 AM

Thanks, Tim...I appreciate the visit!

October 13, 2014 at 9:26 PM

I sent you some soup! Hugs!

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 4:56 AM

I didn't receive it!! PLEASE RESEND!!!

October 13, 2014 at 9:22 PM

I sent you soup mail!

Eileen Manassian

October 15, 2014 at 4:56 AM

Got it! Thanks a bunch!

October 13, 2014 at 4:49 PM

Packs a punch for being so short. Fantastic minimalism, Eileen. I commented on your I Taste Summer btw... sorry again for my long absence! I see I have a lot to catch up on...

Eileen Manassian

October 13, 2014 at 9:02 PM

I can't tell you how happy I am to "see" you here!!! I have missed you SO SO much! I've wondered where you'd gone off to. NOT A WORD, Timothy!!! I was actually worried. OK...I'm done with the little speech and am ready to welcome you back with a hug! :) :) :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 12, 2014 at 12:39 PM

Your arrow has hit the target dead on! A 7, dear Eileen!

Eileen Manassian

October 13, 2014 at 7:09 AM

I love it when my arrow hits the mark, my dear poet! You honor me! As always...a seven from you is heaven!

October 12, 2014 at 10:59 AM

How wonderful...perfectly describes the moment....hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian

October 13, 2014 at 7:09 AM

:) Thanks, Tim. You must have experience such moments to know! ;) Thanks for passing by. Always welcome.

October 12, 2014 at 10:12 AM

wow eileen this is awesome love the rhyme and theme in this little gem. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

October 13, 2014 at 7:12 AM

Thanks, my sweetie pie! I love your post. That WOW does my heart good.

October 12, 2014 at 10:10 AM

Yet love's ardor, sends a rebound as more sweet time is found! Essence of your words brought that inspiration to my mind instantly. Great contest entry, good luck my friend..

Eileen Manassian

October 13, 2014 at 7:12 AM

YOU should join the contest, my dear. Look how you just spin it out like that. :) Thanks for the lovely visit and post.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 12, 2014 at 9:47 AM

I do not know why your poem induces a chill down through my spine. What a feel, God.

Eileen Manassian

October 13, 2014 at 7:12 AM

A chill can be a good feeling, Rajat. Thanks for the visit.

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