Time and the Lack of Time

Today the time creeps slowly from the east to the west; across the grey heavy sky. 
Forty something is weighing on my mind, keeping me boggled down with guilt at my 
lack of accomplishments on this short journey. 
We call life, breathe in and breathe out. The world judges us
by exterior appearances and the amount of money we have in the bank. 
Time ticks and the pendulum swings, whether we are standing still or not. 
The journey and path we take, determines how our time will end.  
Rain is eminent upon the earth and the clouds have brought a cool crispness to the air.  
My thoughts still betray; second guessing my life's journey.  
Now is all I really have, time to focus on the goal and get started.  
Note to self: forgive yourself! God has already.

Time and the lack of time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 13, 2010 at 11:39 AM
True words... lack of time, lack of forgiveness.. these are the number one causes of death.. death of humanity that is... Thank you for your comments.. God Bless u, Dima
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May 1, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Good one :)
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April 28, 2010 at 7:42 AM
We are promised 120 years if we do what is right and take care of ourselves...So you are just a baby and incomparison to immortality well the page just won't stretch far enough..Mom,,Thanks for the comments and taking your time to read my writes...Mostly imaginary...Imagination the greatest nation on earth...
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April 27, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Indeed, God has already forgiven. Just take a deep breath and enjoy the ride, Doris. It's a beautiful one!
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April 27, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Hello Doris. I've been away for a while. I luv this write. It is insightful, and I'm sure I will think of your message all day. Check soup mail. David B
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April 27, 2010 at 7:51 AM
Glorious one today, Doris, have a pleasant day,..p.d.
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April 27, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Amen Sister Doris...Well written and thoughtful...Great....God Bless...Taz
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