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Verlena S. Walker

Time and Space

time & space

sat on the shelf
stand there
sit here
dot i
cross t
place ring on finger
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  Penned November 19, 2014 @ 12:15 AM!

Copyright © Verlena S. Walker | Year Posted 2014

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November 27, 2014 at 9:40 AM

Love what you did with this simple write it says so much, excellent.

November 22, 2014 at 11:32 PM

Two actors in a play . . . many supporting characters . . . a ring and a kiss to seal the deal . . . the words paint the pictures -- in full color. Sorry I missed this when you posted earlier!

Verlena S. Walker

November 23, 2014 at 2:35 AM

Thanks David for your awesome response. Verlena

November 22, 2014 at 7:52 PM

Very creative, loved what you did with this!

Verlena S. Walker

November 22, 2014 at 7:54 PM

Thanks Arthur for this awesome remark. We are finally on the same page with one. Sending you a smile, Verlena...

November 19, 2014 at 2:28 PM

Boy, I can feel the tension in that decision! Well done.

Verlena S. Walker

November 19, 2014 at 3:02 PM

Thanks M.L. for your support... Verlena

Eileen Manassian

November 19, 2014 at 8:57 AM

:) What an interesting and lovely haiku, my dear. I loved the form...Pretty and sweet.

Verlena S. Walker

November 19, 2014 at 12:42 PM

Thanks Eileeen... Verlena

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 19, 2014 at 4:46 AM

- Verlena, a lovely Haiku !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Verlena S. Walker

November 19, 2014 at 12:44 PM

Thanks Anne Lise... Verlena

November 19, 2014 at 2:42 AM

beautifully penned Verlena so few words can say so much:-) hugs jan xx

Verlena S. Walker

November 19, 2014 at 12:44 PM

Thanks Jan... Verlena

Connie Marcum Wong

November 18, 2014 at 11:28 PM

This poem has me really smiling Verlina. I love it!

Verlena S. Walker

November 18, 2014 at 11:38 PM

Thanks Connie. It is done in the name of love and happiness. Verlena

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