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time & space sat on the shelf stand there sit here dot i cross t place ring on finger |_________________________________| Penned November 19, 2014 @ 12:15 AM!

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Date: 11/27/2014 9:40:00 AM
Love what you did with this simple write it says so much, excellent.
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Date: 11/22/2014 11:32:00 PM
Two actors in a play . . . many supporting characters . . . a ring and a kiss to seal the deal . . . the words paint the pictures -- in full color. Sorry I missed this when you posted earlier!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/23/2014 2:35:00 AM
Thanks David for your awesome response. Verlena
Date: 11/22/2014 7:52:00 PM
Very creative, loved what you did with this!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/22/2014 7:54:00 PM
Thanks Arthur for this awesome remark. We are finally on the same page with one. Sending you a smile, Verlena...
Date: 11/19/2014 2:28:00 PM
Boy, I can feel the tension in that decision! Well done.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/19/2014 3:02:00 PM
Thanks M.L. for your support... Verlena
Date: 11/19/2014 8:57:00 AM
:) What an interesting and lovely haiku, my dear. I loved the form...Pretty and sweet.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/19/2014 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Eileeen... Verlena
Date: 11/19/2014 4:46:00 AM
- Verlena, a lovely Haiku !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/19/2014 12:44:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise... Verlena
Date: 11/19/2014 2:42:00 AM
beautifully penned Verlena so few words can say so much:-) hugs jan xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/19/2014 12:44:00 PM
Thanks Jan... Verlena
Date: 11/18/2014 11:28:00 PM
This poem has me really smiling Verlina. I love it!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 11/18/2014 11:38:00 PM
Thanks Connie. It is done in the name of love and happiness. Verlena

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