Time After Time

muscles of the clock
shook me awake, as i neared
the slim margin between dusk
and dawn, having slipped
up - intensity of dread —
soft sunlight alarms the blinds.

i attempt to rise,
entangled in shifting sheets.
dripping sweat from every pore,
my feet meet the floor
and i race to the shower. . .
precariously washing.

hair still soaking wet,
i shift into drive posthaste,
find the highway and i race.
suddenly i slide
to a stop, as the clock stands
in my way, then wakes me up.

7/16/2019
Fives and Sevens Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Joseph May
Picture 4

*Time after time - repeatedly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcgee Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 9:02 AM
I love the ending! Congrrats on your win Kim.
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 5:17 AM
- Luckily ... just a dream - Congratulations on your wonderful win, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 6:32 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Your poem has a very clever ending Kim! I love the internal rhyme. Congratulations on your deserving top win! Excellent work! : ) xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 6:32 AM
Thanks so much, Connie!
Wolf Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 2:42 PM
This was really ingenious, and you sure had me going---'till I was stopped by the clock! Congrats on your win in the contest, Kim. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 6:32 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
May Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 2:30 PM
"Awakened by the roadblock that alarms!..Congrats on your win Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 6:30 AM
Thank you, Joseph,
Ravidas Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Lovely sweat and drive, Kim. Golden congrats)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 6:30 AM
Thank you, Kurt!
Doll Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 11:03 AM
Kim, what a dream/nightmare. You words are so descriptive making the reader experience it, as if they were there. Well done. Best wishes Warren
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, dear Warren!
Blown Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 3:14 PM
reminds of doing shift work...one night i went to work 'sleepwalking' and got sent home...drove both ways, really : /
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 3:16 PM
LOL! I worked shifts back in my Navy days! Definitely messes with your head!
Godwin Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:09 PM
Love the ending, so clever considered the picture. Related all the way through - I think you did a great and entertaining job for this contest, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:12 PM
Thanks so much CayCay!
Cunningham Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 11:19 AM
The nightmare ends, sigh of relief, good luck. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Michael Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 8:33 AM
I enjoyed this too...All the best Kim...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Thank you, Arturo!
One Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 7:28 AM
You write angst very well, these a very deep chokas...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Thank you, my friend!
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