Mohan Chutani Poet Verse

Time

TIME
                                                              run off
                                                        grain by grain 

                                                  birth to death I spend
                                               my life treasure of breaths
                                           leave imprints on grains of sand

                                         “spend life well and cherish yonder’’



By Mohan Chutani on 1.6.2014 
for contest CREATE YOUR PYRAMID 
sponsored by nette onclaud
in the prescribed format

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Nette Onclaud June 16, 2014 at 3:53 PM astounding thoughts about time's mortality or infinity, mohan...belated congrats on your fine win in my contest.. huggs Mohan Chutani June 16, 2014 at 8:56 PM Thanx Nette. grateful for your selection and want to congratulate you as you set us a very imaginative task and made us think deep. Mohan

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2014 at 8:31 AM I agree with Andrea, that is my favorite line as well. Mohan Chutani June 14, 2014 at 9:23 AM Thanks Richard, for your visit. It is very difficult to leave a mark on grains of sand. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2014 at 12:21 AM I love that line about leaving imprints on grains of sand. Congrats for your win with this fine poem. Mohan Chutani June 12, 2014 at 1:28 AM Thank you Andrea for encouragement. Mohan

Skat A June 11, 2014 at 11:12 PM Mohan, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~ Mohan Chutani June 12, 2014 at 1:27 AM Skat, Thanks for encouragements and visit again. Mohan

Carrie Richards June 11, 2014 at 3:48 PM I love this one Mohan.....'grain by grain'....birth to death I spend.." compelling words !!! Nicely written,...a big congratulations!! Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 6:44 PM thanks Carrie, for your nice encouragement. Pl. keep visiting. Mohan

Faye Gibson June 11, 2014 at 2:41 PM Mohan...like this one very much. Congratulations! Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 6:46 PM Thank you Faye for visiting again and enjoying and encouraging. Mohan

Pandita Sietesantos June 11, 2014 at 2:04 PM Mohan, congratulations to you on another fine win - well done, my friend! Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 6:48 PM Thankyou Pandita, I cherish your encouragements. Mohan

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2014 at 9:49 AM Hi Mohan, thank you for visiting my blog.. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~ Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 6:50 PM Thank you Linda, I made a quick attempt to enter your new contest. Pl. visit in your own time. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta June 11, 2014 at 6:39 AM Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Mohan Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 6:59 AM Thanks Dr. Ram once again. Mohan

Paul Callus June 11, 2014 at 4:51 AM Congratulations, Mohan. You did very well with this pyramid. I love the second stanza. // paul Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 5:18 AM Thank you Paul for your encouragement. And congratulations for your top win on own Time pyramid. Best. Mohan

Seren Roberts June 11, 2014 at 4:09 AM well done Mohan ...Seren Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 7:00 AM Thanks Seren for your encouragement. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 3:42 AM :) great one indeed :) congratulations.. :) Mohan Chutani June 11, 2014 at 7:00 AM Olive, thanks, my friend. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2014 at 8:49 PM this is really nice. I like how you related it to yourself. Mohan Chutani June 2, 2014 at 5:06 AM Thankyou Andrea, the topic set by nette itself was a bit of a challenge. 'I" can be anyone. Mohan

Diane Christian June 1, 2014 at 4:45 PM lovely poem nice pyramid Mohan Chutani June 2, 2014 at 5:14 AM Thanx Diane. Mohan