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Time

Time to say goodbye
 Or time to say hello
 Time to say i love you
 Or time for me to go
 Time to leave the heartache
 Or time to start again
 Time to say you love me
 Or time to leave the pain
 Time to find an answer
 Or time to break away
 Time to say i need you
 Or time to close the day
 Time to give up hoping
 Or time to love and pray
 Time to say i want you
 Or time to part the way.

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Skat A Date: 1/20/2013 5:35:00 PM Nice featured poem~SKAT Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/20/2013 9:40:00 AM Dennis, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA Login to Reply

Roy Jerden Date: 1/17/2013 6:56:00 AM Very nice and put together well. Good rhyme and rhythm, too, which I like a lot. The recurring beginning to each couplet lends power to the theme. Consider breaking up the format from one long stanza to couplets to give it even more power. Also consider changing the "i's" to "I's" for better orthography. Cheers, Roy Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/8/2012 9:26:00 AM Hi there and welcome to the soup . Enjoyed you three writes so far and look forward to some more xx Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/6/2012 5:46:00 AM Hey Dennis, you write very well - I like your poem. - Will welcome you to the P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Read ... give and receive comments on what you and others write. - I've been a member for a year now, enjoying myself with this page. - It's always nice to get new members. - Have a nice day. - Greeting from "winter Norway" and Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/4/2012 12:32:00 PM Dennis, making decisions is hard. It is a good thing we can make everything out of time. lets not waste it. ~SKAT~ Login to Reply