Time

Time to say goodbye Or time to say hello Time to say i love you Or time for me to go Time to leave the heartache Or time to start again Time to say you love me Or time to leave the pain Time to find an answer Or time to break away Time to say i need you Or time to close the day Time to give up hoping Or time to love and pray Time to say i want you Or time to part the way.

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Skat A

Date: 1/20/2013 5:35:00 PM

Nice featured poem~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2013 9:40:00 AM

Dennis, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

Roy Jerden

Date: 1/17/2013 6:56:00 AM

Very nice and put together well. Good rhyme and rhythm, too, which I like a lot. The recurring beginning to each couplet lends power to the theme. Consider breaking up the format from one long stanza to couplets to give it even more power. Also consider changing the "i's" to "I's" for better orthography. Cheers, Roy

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/8/2012 9:26:00 AM

Hi there and welcome to the soup . Enjoyed you three writes so far and look forward to some more xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2012 5:46:00 AM

Hey Dennis, you write very well - I like your poem. - Will welcome you to the P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Read ... give and receive comments on what you and others write. - I've been a member for a year now, enjoying myself with this page. - It's always nice to get new members. - Have a nice day. - Greeting from "winter Norway" and Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 12/4/2012 12:32:00 PM

Dennis, making decisions is hard. It is a good thing we can make everything out of time. lets not waste it. ~SKAT~