Time

Time has my heart hostage the ventricle all bent
I will not surrender till every second of time is spent






For Black Eyed Susan's contest:  Time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Patrikar Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 8:14 AM
encouraging poem
Babcock Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:55 PM
Love your take on time. I too, will not surrender tell the last breath. love phyl
Wellington Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Thank you Phyllis!
Glans Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Nice!!! very deep words love it!!!
Wellington Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Tnx Cheryl!
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