Time

While living our lives in daily sequence,
Time slips away without recompense.


8/25/12
For Susan's "Time - single couplet only" contest

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Lee Ramage

Date: 9/8/2012 10:32:00 PM

so true. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/7/2012 1:35:00 AM

Your entry was better than mine. Congratulations on winning.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:15:00 PM

well deserved win, Mandy. Big congrats to you.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/6/2012 1:03:00 PM

So true, Kim...belated congrats on your win with your wonderful couplet! Hugs, Rhonda

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/6/2012 8:25:00 AM

So much in so few words......and time slips away without notice.....that is the part that makes this poem so significant. Cherish each moment is the lesson here. Nice one, Kim!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:24:00 PM

Kim, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 6:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2012 10:22:00 PM

a poetic germ.. congrats on your super win with huggs! :)

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/4/2012 4:45:00 PM

Beautiful piece,Kim.Great job..Congrats on your well deserved win..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/4/2012 8:35:00 AM

Congratulations on win Kim xx

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/30/2012 10:07:00 AM

Yes, so true. Time seems to glide away, while we are so engaged with the cares of this life. Thanks for visiting. One love. Joy Wells

Erich Goller

Date: 8/27/2012 9:45:00 AM

yes time slips away to fast, a very nice expressed Couplet. Thanks for sharing it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2012 7:47:00 PM

time is not very nice!! Me likes this!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2012 5:01:00 PM

Good luck in the contest,,, thank you for sharing, xox~PD

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/26/2012 1:39:00 PM

Nice thought. It's true without doubt. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2012 1:20:00 PM

Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/26/2012 12:39:00 PM

An excellent entry for Susan's contest, Kim! I do hope to get an entry in your contest tonight. I hope it doesn't fill-up first. I've had so little time to write lately...love and blessings, Rhonda

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2012 12:22:00 PM

so true - love this thoughtful write, Kim. Many congrats on your wins : )