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(No AI, ChatGPT, machine learning (ML), etc., was used in the composition of this poem.)

Time

Time, the great equalizer, yet mastered by none;
Deadline’s enemy, said to fly when linked with fun.
An endless river flowing toward the future;
Excites planners anticipating adventure.

If time was the medium to settle the score,
Would it make people pause and reflect a bit more;
And gauge success by serving a higher purpose;
Not by the rat-race, keep-up, cash-chasing circus?

Asset? Liability? Depends on one’s use;
To daydreamers, it can be a life-wasting muse.
Valuable to those who save early in life;
But wait too long, and it engenders later strife.

A claimed healer of wounds, helping many forget;
Prior mistakes, harms, other sources of regret.
Time moves steadily forward, present becomes past;
Outpacing people, places, things that do not last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 3:17 PM
I remember a contest devoted to the theme of time (if it were like money). Was this one written for that contest? I think you did a great job speaking of time in that way.
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 3:46 PM
Thank you SO MUCH for visiting my lonely poem, and your nice comments!! :) Yes, I did enter that contest and did not even place. I was quite surprised, especially since I tried very hard to speak directly to the prompts and flavor/theme of the contest, and I continue to believe I succeeded. It just shows the subjective nature (being totally honest here) of some of these contests. Anyway, I appreciate your visit today, Andrea, and being the first to comment. Blessings and very best, Bartholomew
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