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TIME

I walk down the corridor of time looking at the distance that we have travelled from, we met at the crossing where the line stood straight and the traffic was moving all over the place, and you held the book in your hand pointing towards the sun. I wasn’t sure what you wanted to say but from the look on your face, we have come a long way and we will be together to end of our days, what could pull us apart, even when the valley is dark we will hold on to each other's promise and seal our destiny with a kiss and when the night gets cold we will wrap the towel around our soul. If you could hold on to time, would you say that you are mine? If you could hold on to time, would you change your mind? I can hear the wind howling and their spirits are groaning and the birds on the trees are singing a sweet melody for thee, the spring of yesterday is withering away and the cherry blossom on the hill with its magnificent light has crossed the barrier of time, listen to the whispers and you will get the final answer. Its time!

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Date: 3/20/2024 6:05:00 PM
Dear Christine, a wonderful captivating journey through the corridors of time, where memories intertwine with hopes and promises. I love your imagery of a shared past, present, and future showing us of the timeless bond between souls. Christine your words evoke a sense of longing and determination to weather life's challenges together, sealed with a kiss and wrapped in the warmth of love. I liked how your question posed about holding onto time invites reflection on the fleeting nature of moments and the significance of cherishing each one. You beautifully capture the essence of love's enduring strength amidst the passage of time. - Blessings, Daniel
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