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whimsical lass in a calico dress holding hat on head of a bob-cut tress looking for one daisy in a autum wheat field .....and finding instead an old wagon wheel tom-boy/lady in between hayrides and romance.... just looking for fun she is a halloween queen lovely lady in a long white dress with slender white fingers delicately holding a orchid bouquet... she looks at her love with his strong lean face fine old woman in a blue cashmere...... holding her dreams against the tick of the clock stooped old granny watching for him lighting a kerosine lamp ..... she keeps supper warm on his t.v. platter. janetta

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Date: 3/28/2009 8:55:00 AM
Much to think about in this poem. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this woman's journey with us. I appreciate your kind words on my haiku. Karen
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Date: 11/6/2008 5:11:00 AM
Quick look at life. Damn, as we get older it seems to go that fast. God Bless. Vince
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