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My hair caressed by the fervent musical breeze, atop the cliff of innocence my fingers freeze, I look down in ravines of whirling waves and wait, the moment of euphoria clings to a concealed fate. The anxious clock seems to drag hollow slumbers, I've been fretting over those ticking numbers, a distant lullaby from memories uncurls my hopes, it blankets me emerging from mist in layered slopes. I've taken the plunge into oceans of warm dreams, infinite frames scintillating topaz blue beams, an eternal stream engulfs my soul in emerald light, my past merging into celestial rivers glowing in white. I float in beautiful streams to find a tranquil shore, a strand charms me to unlock a secret ruby door. Oh! I am present in loops of time in that mystic world, my childhood and motherhood soar, their wings unfurled. July 4, 2020 Time- 8 Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance(A Dear Heart) ~Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 7/12/2020 4:56:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your podium finish in Constance's contest, Aditi. This is definitely one of the best winning entries I have come across! Well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thank you for such kind words of appreciation Paul. Glad you visited my page. Blessings :)
Date: 7/9/2020 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Aditi, on your win! Brilliant imageries! Love, Mala
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes and appreciation Mala. Much love :)
Date: 7/7/2020 5:43:00 PM
Back with congrats on your podium win my friend--splendid write, as always, Aditi.
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:24:00 AM
Thank you for coming to convey your kind wishes my friend :)
Date: 7/7/2020 4:39:00 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my time contest, wonderful writing _Constance
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Date: 7/7/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Constance. I am really honored by the placement in your contest :)
Date: 7/7/2020 1:19:00 AM
Back with congrats Aditi.. Great win..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/7/2020 1:35:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation Jenish :)
Date: 7/5/2020 8:36:00 AM
This is a mesmerizing odyssey my friend in your articulate rhymes, that take the reader traversing through memories. Splendid write, as always--certain to win you a TOP place, Aditi.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 8:41:00 AM
I am really glad you love my words Vijay. Your constant support through encouraging words is a blessing to me here. Thank you for such lovely appreciation. God bless you my friend :)
Date: 7/5/2020 12:46:00 AM
Wow.. This is beautifully crafted with your divine pen.. I have to say it again.. You are a poet of great caliber.. Good luck Aditi..
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Date: 7/5/2020 1:57:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation Jenish. Your words always encourage me to write better than earlier. Blessings :)
Date: 7/4/2020 1:58:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Aditi, with great imagery and expression. Blessings,Gordon
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:49:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Gordon. Blessings :)

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