Time

"Time flies over us, but leaves its shadow behind."
                                           Nathaniel Hawthorne



I sneer at grandfather clock, standing in the hall,
listening as his ticking, leaves my anger spent.
I long to bind his hands and make time crawl,
and if that's considered a sin, I will never repent.

His old brass pendulum swings much too fast,
like a gossip, repeatedly wagging his tongue.
Oh, how I would love to make him gong his last
so I'd have eternal peace when his bell is wrung.

His infinite chime persists at the top of each hour
and in that moment I feel recurring pain.
I must get past the relentless echo of his power.
Headaches from his hammering drive me insane! 

Not in the present, but I swear that one day soon
I'll find a way to remove his pulley and chains.
No longer will he gambol that annoying tune,
a cadenced rhythm in redundant refrain.



Time - 8 Word Challenge
Sponsored by A Dear Heart
Posted on July 3, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Koplin Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 6:32 AM
An absolutely wonderful poem!! Congratulations
Logan Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Thank you very much, Mark.
La France Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 4:37 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my time contest, wonderful writing _Constance
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 5:52 PM
I appreciate the consideration you've shown my poetry. Thank you, Constance.
Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 2:09 PM
Your beautiful words reflect the heartfelt emotions behind this muse Jenna. Congratulations on your win! :) Much love!
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 5:52 PM
Thanks so much for your generous remarks, Aditi.
Warrior Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 8:01 AM
A fleeting moment is gone forever...only the echo remains...Congrats!! on the win Jenna...awesome write my friend...^WW^ :o)
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 5:51 PM
I hear the echo of your wings as you fly. Thanks for the congrats, Warrior.
Somadas Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:15 AM
a cadenced rhythm in redundant refrain.. Wow.. Splendid write Jenna.. Poetry at its best.. A FAVE.. Congrats on your great win..
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Thank you for the line quoted and for choosing this as a favorite. Jenish-I appreciate that.
Watt Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 10:12 PM
Great job, and congratulations on your 'time'-lyrics win, Jenna!
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, John.
Gondolf Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Back to say congrats on your win, Jenna, I told you not to throw in the towel :) Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 6:50 AM
Yes, you did, John, and thank you. Although 2nd place after so many ranked as #1 makes it feel like 11th place. Not a complaint, rather an observance of the concept.
Wolf Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Ha, ha! Old Father Time just can't win: Some want him to slow down, like you; others want him to speed up, like kids do. It's time to cut him some slack... Great write, Jenna. Kudos, Gershon
Logan Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 6:09 PM
I guess it doesn't matter what we want. Time just keeps doing his thing. lol Thanks a lot, Gershon.
Watt Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 2:06 PM
It's hard to believe it's already July! It feels like just a week ago we were told to shelter in place. Nice musings on the nature of time, I liked your using the grandfather clock as your totem for time. Also the word 'gambol'. I wish you all the best in the contest ~ John
Logan Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 6:08 PM
You're right, John. Four months seems like 4 weeks. Thank you for liking my take on Time!
Nicole Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 9:38 PM
Oh my!!! Indeed we have all felt this way. Please make Time stand still. There is nothing we can do. Sadly. Just move with the moments. This is so beautifully written and presented. My best to you. :) Brandy
Logan Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Thank you for the gracious comments, Brandy.
Pandit Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Innovative take on the contest, Jenna--indeed those chimes can sometimes be annoying. You blended the words in this write seamlessly.
Logan Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:43 AM
Thank you kindly for visiting and leaving your thoughts, Vijay.
Leffanta Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 1:44 PM
My late wife inherited a grandfather clock from her maternal great-great- grandfather and you have described her feelings toward it perfectly! Aloha! Rico
Logan Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:42 AM
I guess it takes getting used to, but I can live without the pealing and chiming. Thank you for your comments, Rico.
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 9:05 AM
- A wonderful poem - Best wishes in the contest, a winning poem in my eyes Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile. What nice greetings and sweet comment. Thank you for both!
Gondolf Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 8:24 AM
Wow, you need to chill girl and let the grandfather clock do his thing. I find the rhymical swaying of the pendulum to be somewhat calming. Actually I think this is very well done, Jenna, using the clock to display the theme of your poem. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 8:39 AM
ha ha John. I don't have a grandfather clock, just an imagination of that constant ticking. If it brings you a sense of calm maybe my imagination is off kilter. Thanks for your travels to my page.
Cunningham Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Great use of the eight words Jenna, well composed, if only we could slow down time. Good luck Tom
Logan Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 8:37 AM
So true, Tom. I find it moving more quickly since lockdown, and that surprises me. I'm pleased by your comments.
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