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Time

The clock is ticking Time is passing Mistakes are engraved Looking back I cannot erase nor can I replace Time has made a permanent place I cannot control, I cannot erase Things of the pass are forever engraved Time we cannot change Nor can we turn back or accelerate Time is great it's the one thing Mankind cannot control or erase Time is a master piece of its own It teaches us how to avoid mutual mistakes For there are things in this life We cannot erase or change

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Date: 12/9/2018 10:46:00 AM
Excellent piece Patricia! :) xomo
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Scarlette Patricia Howard
Date: 12/9/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you its nice when fellow poets enjoy reading your poems
Date: 12/9/2018 6:36:00 AM
Oh i wrote something a bit similar today.. sometimes its too late... you expressed it so well..
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Scarlette Patricia Howard
Date: 12/9/2018 11:03:00 AM
Silent one many thanks a compliment from you makes my writing enjoyable and gives me the strength and motivation to carry one
Date: 12/9/2018 6:15:00 AM
Not now...one day time will be frozen and unfrozen...and relived again in present time... we kinda do it when we regret...Just playing...A wonderful poem of life...Every moment a treasure...
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Scarlette Patricia Howard
Date: 12/9/2018 11:06:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/9/2018 6:01:00 AM
it is interesting how once the now is gone we take past memory-dreams as real
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Scarlette Patricia Howard
Date: 12/9/2018 11:07:00 AM
Many thanks your comment means the world to me

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