Time

Transient time flows quickly by 
like windswept ripples in changing seas
as fleeting forms shift, then fade away  
a relentless call from currents deep. 

As sunlight glints with liquid winks
life teems in time beneath its wake
moments turn into whirling hours
that funnel and spout in tide and spray. 

And when the vast blue sky grows tired
and yawns as sunset streaks the sky
its shifting clouds will stop and stretch 
as a weary day settles in for the night. 

Time then repeats it’s rhythmic songs
through months and seasons, with varied tunes
by winds or rains or thunderstorms 
or by a fresh soft breeze in June. 

Time carries us along without a reprieve 
within its realm we live, move and breathe 
we sail, like ships, through changing tides
‘til in death’s wake, we take our leave. 







10/17/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Laura, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "T" Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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November 11, 2021 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Constance. So happy this placed in your contest! :)
Alex Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:47 AM
I've read some of your works. They are great. This too. Congratulations!
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November 10, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Thanks, Christuraj! :)
Proxenos Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Hi Laura, Time stands still for no man. It is an eternal phenomena which steals seconds, minutes, day, weeks, months and years. It imprints upon us memories of love, hate, war, achievement, birth, death, happiness and so much more. I love your poem Laura, I have a similar one that I wrote several years ago. Great write. xoxo, Jennifer.
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November 10, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Thank you so much for your comments, Jennifer! I’m so glad you enjoyed my poem. :)
Mudumbai Acharya Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 12:16 AM
Greater write. In-depth feel in time. Live in time till we leave. Stimulated.
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November 7, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Thank you, Dr. Archarva! Your kind comments are appreciated :)
Mcconnell Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Lovely piece Laura, showing how we're controlled by time, well penned! Gordon
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November 6, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Thank you, Gordon! I really appreciate your kind comments :)
Warrior Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Lovely write my friend...nice to see you again, Laura...our condolences for your fathers passing...this Oct.24.2018 will be one year for my mom...may the Angels take care of them and us...love & light...^WW^
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October 19, 2018 at 12:11 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments and condolences, Winged Warrior. God bless you!
Pandit Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 6:40 AM
I enjoyed the tone, theme, and the flow of your poem, Laura. Beautiful, indeed! Haven't seen you in this space for some time.
Leiser Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Vijay! I haven’t written much since my dad died 3 months ago.,Trying to start writing again. Hoping all is well with you :)
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