Timber

dark with oaks
time fell back -
six o’clock midnight

11/10/2022

timehaiku

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Bill Baker

November 14, 2022 at 1:43 PM

We shouldn't be messing with mother nature! Leave the clocks alone, already! Nice poem, Kim. Bill

Kim Rodrigues

November 14, 2022 at 5:30 PM

Many feel that way! It was just a given when I was a kid. Thank you, Bill!

Sara Kendrick

November 12, 2022 at 5:46 AM

The time change still has my biological internal clock all messed up. LOL..I hope to get to feeling better from the change soon. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

November 12, 2022 at 1:30 PM

I think I’m ok now. But still so early darkness falls.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 11, 2022 at 9:35 AM

... well written ... back and forth ... is the same distance :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

November 11, 2022 at 1:34 AM

With the time change, I sleep more. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

November 11, 2022 at 5:07 AM

Aww… Be blessed, dear Victor!

Gershon Wolf

November 10, 2022 at 7:49 PM

Perfect summation of how one feels the first afternoon/evening/night the clock has been set back: 'Six o'clock midnight.' You really nailed this one, Kim. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

November 11, 2022 at 5:07 AM

Thank you, Gershon! Sure makes you feel sleepy!