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Timber

dark with oaks time fell back - six o’clock midnight 11/10/2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2022 1:43:00 PM

We shouldn't be messing with mother nature! Leave the clocks alone, already! Nice poem, Kim. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2022 5:30:00 PM

Many feel that way! It was just a given when I was a kid. Thank you, Bill!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2022 5:46:00 AM

The time change still has my biological internal clock all messed up. LOL..I hope to get to feeling better from the change soon. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2022 1:30:00 PM

I think I’m ok now. But still so early darkness falls.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2022 9:35:00 AM

... well written ... back and forth ... is the same distance :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/11/2022 1:34:00 AM

With the time change, I sleep more. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2022 5:07:00 AM

Aww… Be blessed, dear Victor!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2022 7:49:00 PM

Perfect summation of how one feels the first afternoon/evening/night the clock has been set back: 'Six o'clock midnight.' You really nailed this one, Kim. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2022 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon! Sure makes you feel sleepy!

Becky Forbes

Date: 11/10/2022 5:56:00 PM

Six o-clock midnight is right, pout, pout! Makes me want to go to bed at 7 :-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2022 5:07:00 AM

I know! Love pout pout…

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/10/2022 3:49:00 PM

Great haiku, Kim. You conveyed such a wonderful picture of the dark oaks in darkness.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2022 5:00:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad!