Tim Is Taken

There's a young fellow on P-Soup by the name of Tim Ladies love him and wished they could tickle his chin Among other naughty things Much sadness it did bring For Tim is the Daddy of a bunch of wee “hims” © Jack Ellison 2015
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Chircop Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Tim is indeed taken : )So the girls who have softies for him ,better touch one part,and that s only his chin : D.His girl goes by the name of spoilt brat and peach.Heard She has long nails and biting teeth..So beware B-) any other she or her B-).Sweet limerick Jack B-)
Ellison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 4:06 PM
I see Timothy agrees with you dear Charmaine! He is the male version of you dear lady! Big squeezie hugs and kisses from this old fellow! Love, Jack xxx
Smith Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:28 PM
: )
Cervenka Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 1:10 PM
Very cute Jack. You will be happy to know that he has his own way of letting the ladies know his heart is taken..should make you darn proud of him Jack! ~Jan
Ellison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 1:19 PM
He's a symbol to look up to for all daddies and hubbies!!! GREAT GUY! Huggs to you dear Janet!!! xxx
Eastman Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 11:54 AM
OH! That's so C.U.T.E... No Dragon you can't have a bunch of wee hims... Why? Cause he might want to keep THEM! Silly Dragon!... Tho when they cry... He might let you baby sit... LOL
Ellison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 12:28 PM
Tim is real popular with the ladies!!! Tim the Charmer! xxx
Smith Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Lol....thank you my good friend. All their names start with J too...j/ k only half of them.
Cervenka Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 1:11 PM
No you cannot put your kids names here Tim. He's already invaded with Js.
Ellison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 8:19 AM
This is getting spooky! Glad you liked it my friend! Cheers, Jack
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 6:06 AM
aww cute lovely tribute to Tim:-) hugs jan xx
Ellison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Ha ha ha ha! Only you would notice that, dear Jan! Yum yum, love melons... my favourite fruit!!! Hugs, Jack xxx (grinning)
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 6:29 AM
errr have you noticed the title - spells TIT lol - you must have been thinking of my melons when you wrote this lol:-) hugs jan xx
Ellison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 6:16 AM
It seems ALL the ladies on the Soup have a soft spot for Tim! Hugs, Jack xxx
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