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Till We Kiss

Luscious lips of red Lure like magnets of the flesh Tenderly we meet http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-10.php

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/29/2014 2:02:00 AM

cherry supple tips gracious for midnight caress so softly they touch

James Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 4:53:00 PM

Ooo to have a midnight adress, lips of desire, moonlight caress. Share to me as I unto you, let's be humans in the human Zoo. My name is James, how do you do! :) x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/29/2014 2:03:00 AM

Sweet alluring senryu!:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/21/2010 12:59:00 PM

Cant help but smile after reading this one :) Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2010 5:18:00 PM

Great passionate write that you have penned in this hot poem list group...It is romantic and demure..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 6/20/2010 4:52:00 AM

wow...so erotic...I love this one so so much....inspiring...^_^ v

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/18/2010 12:34:00 AM

Ow those Luscious pulped lips,Our Highlandes is lost in his thoughts now:)haha!C

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/17/2010 3:32:00 PM

Looking at your poems you just know I'm going to pick a poem like this to read first! LOL Passion-filled! "magnets of the flesh" lots of spice in this write, James! Peace, love, audrey

Sarah Hales

Date: 6/17/2010 12:23:00 PM

HOT JAMES !!!!! love it ...x sarah x

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/17/2010 6:56:00 AM

ooh, a verrry passionate senryu, love it! ~ Sharon :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/16/2010 5:45:00 PM

Very luring, luscious and passionate

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2010 4:55:00 PM

VERRRRY nice, James! thanks for your "wow" factor you gave me. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2010 4:44:00 PM

Passionate, dear highlander. Very nicely done! Enjoyed the image as well as the alliteration. Love, Carolyn

Date: 6/16/2010 4:13:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Nice use of imagery and alliteration! Karen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/16/2010 3:18:00 PM

Love these words!!! well said

T.L. Drover

Date: 6/16/2010 1:08:00 PM

I really like it, although since two of your lines start with the same sound, it would almost flow better to have a similar sound in the third. Excellent use of comparison.