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Till We Kiss


Luscious lips of red
Lure like magnets of the flesh
Tenderly we meet




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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

September 29, 2014 at 2:02 AM

cherry supple tips gracious for midnight caress so softly they touch

James Fraser

September 30, 2014 at 4:53 PM

Ooo to have a midnight adress, lips of desire, moonlight caress. Share to me as I unto you, let's be humans in the human Zoo. My name is James, how do you do! :) x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

September 29, 2014 at 2:03 AM

Sweet alluring senryu!:)

Wilma Neels

June 21, 2010 at 12:59 PM

Cant help but smile after reading this one :) Wilma

Sara Kendrick

June 20, 2010 at 5:18 PM

Great passionate write that you have penned in this hot poem list group...It is romantic and demure..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Juan Paolo Galua

June 20, 2010 at 4:52 AM

wow...so erotic...I love this one so so much....inspiring...^_^ v

C.C Bloomsfield

June 18, 2010 at 12:34 AM

Ow those Luscious pulped lips,Our Highlandes is lost in his thoughts now:)haha!C

Audrey Haick

June 17, 2010 at 3:32 PM

Looking at your poems you just know I'm going to pick a poem like this to read first! LOL Passion-filled! "magnets of the flesh" lots of spice in this write, James! Peace, love, audrey

Sarah Hales

June 17, 2010 at 12:23 PM

HOT JAMES !!!!! love it ...x sarah x

Sharon Tideswell

June 17, 2010 at 6:56 AM

ooh, a verrry passionate senryu, love it! ~ Sharon :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 16, 2010 at 5:45 PM

Very luring, luscious and passionate

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2010 at 4:55 PM

VERRRRY nice, James! thanks for your "wow" factor you gave me. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

June 16, 2010 at 4:44 PM

Passionate, dear highlander. Very nicely done! Enjoyed the image as well as the alliteration. Love, Carolyn

June 16, 2010 at 4:13 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Nice use of imagery and alliteration! Karen

Michael J. Falotico

June 16, 2010 at 3:18 PM

Love these words!!! well said

T.L. Drover

June 16, 2010 at 1:08 PM

I really like it, although since two of your lines start with the same sound, it would almost flow better to have a similar sound in the third. Excellent use of comparison.

Till We Kiss

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