Till They Hear Their Car Beep

Old folks forget where they parked their Jeep They wander around till they're almost asleep Till there's just one car "That's our car by gar" But still push the button till they hear their car beep! © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 10/18/2015 5:15:00 PM
While looking for his car Jack had to go pee...couldn't find a loo so he went on a tree...was seen by a nun....so he started to run.... forgot to pull up his pant and fell on his wee (wee)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/18/2015 6:06:00 PM
LOL... you are fast becoming a limerjester, Mr. Tim!!!
Date: 10/18/2015 4:11:00 PM
I parked my car in the lot, When I came out I forgot. My wife had dropped me off, and It was me that was lost. I do it all the time Jack.lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/18/2015 6:05:00 PM
HOW ABOUT THAT...ME TOO! I use my beeper so I know the general area where it's hiding! Sometimes the other cars give it away by all beeping at the same time which only confuses me more!!! LOL
Date: 10/18/2015 11:26:00 AM
Truer words could never be spoken....The key to our heart...yes...indeed...looking for our car (or yours) Romance is in the air!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/18/2015 11:58:00 AM
Awww! The KEY to our heart! You're an old softie, Miss Judith!!! Love from the Jakester!!! xoxox
Date: 10/18/2015 11:05:00 AM
I always park in the same place... Or else losing my car is always the case... Then if I forget my feet can always retrace... And I always then find it with a hardy embrace... All done by God's good grace...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/18/2015 11:15:00 AM
Going for a follow up memory test... hope I don't forget!!! LOL xxxx
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Carol Eastman
Date: 10/18/2015 11:07:00 AM
lled muscle memory... and is extremely helpful... The repetition works on everything... I always put my keys in the same place too... Unfortunately my glasses don't work that well... When on my head it's out of sight, out of mind!
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