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Till My Blues Fade To Grey

Things will never be the same 
If only I can feel this pain
A solitary face 
Stripped of all its love and grace
For your freight train shows no sign of stalling
As I am thrown to the ground , barely crawling
Timeously evolving into a state of flux
Translated into plain English 
I think life my life sucks
So I take luck as my weapon
If life me should threaten
and pray for the day
My blues fade to grey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/1/2010 2:51:00 PM
Chris, you are touching souls my friend! I firmly believe luck comes to less developed souls, but the harder life seems the more developed you will be as a person. By you writting this piece, you have touched mine
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Date: 2/15/2010 11:37:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Chris. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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