Paul Callus Poet Verse

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Till Morning Came

He was the leading dancer till morning came
                    with a willing partner, ne’er the same,
                          savoured the rhythmic delight
                          that flowed through the night
                                while they danced
                                            till
                                    break of dawn 
                                  to raw vibrations
                              urgency of sensations
                    as lost in passion she called his name.
               He was the leading dancer till morning came.

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                    Contest: Any Poem #32  (mar 2015)
                           Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
                                      Placed 3rd

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Susan Ashley November 27, 2017 at 8:50 PM Paul, this poem so intrigues me.. beautifully expressed in rhythm, rhyme, imagery and intrigue; whose name did she call while lost in passion..? Maybe not his... The identical first and last lines can have two different meanings from the start to the end of your poem. Love the crossroads you present my ingenious friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan Paul Callus November 28, 2017 at 3:09 PM You leave no stone unturned, Susan!! The reader is free to draw his/her own conclusions. I like it when readers find themselves at a crossroads. Once again, thank you, not only for reading, but also for your insightful musing. ~ Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos August 13, 2015 at 10:23 AM Congratulation on a great win, dear Paul! Like your leading dancer, this magnificent piece showed-off lovely imagery, form, and beautiful flow. I thoroughly enjoyed the read! A-7 of course! Warmest regards. Pandita Paul Callus August 13, 2015 at 1:45 PM Thank you Pandita! Your lovely feedback is a joy to read:) ... and the high rating is appreciated. Glad you enjoyed. ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 12, 2015 at 2:06 AM Wow a passionate write Paul, it perfectly rhymed in every way! Congrats on awesome win! Paul Callus August 12, 2015 at 10:32 AM A passionate wow is very uplifting, Upma:) Thank you! Hope you're keeping well:) // paul

Alexis Y. August 12, 2015 at 1:57 AM Paul, this is such a beautiful and romantic dance.l enjoyed the entire dance. Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis Paul Callus August 12, 2015 at 10:34 AM Glad you enjoyed this dance, Alexis! Thank you for stopping by with lovely comments and congrats. ~ All the best. // paul

Skat A August 12, 2015 at 1:55 AM Congratulations Paul...SKAT Paul Callus August 12, 2015 at 10:28 AM Thank you, Skat. Have a lovely day:) // paul

Poet Destroyer A August 12, 2015 at 1:13 AM Hello Paul, time just keeps passing, super enjoyed.. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Paul Callus August 12, 2015 at 10:30 AM Thank you for enjoying and having me on your winners' list, Linda. ~ Time is our main enemy:) Hugs // paul

Neva Romaine February 27, 2015 at 12:56 PM Hey Paul, stopped by for a visit. Wow! This is a deeply passionate and emotion grabbing poem. So beautifully written. Be Blessed, Neva Paul Callus February 27, 2015 at 1:28 PM Hi Neva...so pleased that you found it to your liking! Thank you for a lovely visit:) Take care. // paul

Julia Ward February 17, 2015 at 6:08 AM Very nice. Count my hugs or stand-ins as I work through all your poems. Hugs, Alicia Paul Callus February 17, 2015 at 9:46 AM I admire your resilience, Alicia! You have a though job in front of you:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 17, 2015 at 5:27 AM i like the two thoughts i perceive in this poem.. :)! nice Paul.. :)! Paul Callus February 17, 2015 at 9:42 AM Hi Olive_eloi!:) Lovely to see you again in circulation. Hope the vacation was lovely and that the flu was not too hard on you. I'll go see if you posted anything new. hugs // paul

Kp Nunez February 17, 2015 at 2:55 AM Great form, the free flowing words too. Goodluck in the contest...Smiles from the land of thousand isles. :D Kim Paul Callus February 17, 2015 at 3:30 AM I'm so pleased you liked it Kim; txs for stopping by...and for the nice comments. All the best. // paul

Nathan D. February 17, 2015 at 1:54 AM good luck in the contest great write. Paul Callus February 17, 2015 at 3:32 AM Thank you Nathan. All the best. // paul

Frederic Parker February 16, 2015 at 6:47 PM Well done Paul with a nice story line Paul Callus February 17, 2015 at 3:29 AM Thank you Frederic; pleased you found it to your liking. // paul

Skat A February 16, 2015 at 6:08 PM Hi Paul, this is very sweet. I could last in it all night long. Always~ SKAT Paul Callus February 17, 2015 at 3:18 AM Pleased you liked it, Skat; all night long is great, as long as you don't have to go to work in the morning:) // paul