Till I See the Sea

Till i see the sea

when will these eyes
wholly understand
about the mystery
within this beautiful world

my unknown sense
filled my invisible wings
with such fondness
when the freedom of the seagulls
flew into my eyes
with their delight
and beauty

the more i saw them
the more
i heard
the wave in my heart
hummed many stories

and all the mystery
rushed toward
my soul
danced in romantic tunes
and whispered softly

till i see the sea
till i see the sea

~ (c) Sukmawati Komala~
Jan 2014

I am honored to my take part in the Contest - with the title of" Impress Me " sponsored by Giorgio V. and  would like to send my best appreciation to Mr Giorgio V , for his encouragement and supports in writing poems and to be Glorify with the nature, love and peace.
~~~ for Contest , sponsored by Giorgio V.~~~
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Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 7:51 PM
Enjoyed the write and congrats on the fine win, Sukmawati
Komala Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 6:40 PM
Thank you deary DR Ram Mehta.. for the supports.. appeciate so much :) all the very best :) light and peace :) Sk
Dunn Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 6:40 PM
I love the sea and ocean and for myself i've dreamed to see it also but i've only had the lake. So it's had to do for me, enjoyed reading from another who wants to see the real marvel as much as myself. thank you for your comments cheri
Komala Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 6:43 PM
O my deary Cherl.. thank you so much and hope the days will always sing you a wonderful melody.. much love and peace <3 Sk
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