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8/8/2026 for Let's Do It! Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Till I Met You

Two arms, two lips, and one soul
tender, beautiful and kind 
in my imagination - 
and then I met you.
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Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 4:29 AM
- Together we are one ... lovely, David :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! 😊
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 4:06 AM
Aww this is sweet and lovely! I love the ending the most because depending on the mood it can be interpreted in a positive way or negative.. right now I would prefer thinking it is in a beautiful lovey dovey way. Sweet take Pleasure reading Sending you light always Best wishes
Crandall Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 10:55 AM
maybe that was my subconscious
Crandall Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 10:54 AM
Thanks, Ink! That's cool. . I was thinking of it in the lovey dovey way, but you're right, this poem has more dimension than I thought - lol - it could have the opposite subtle double meaning! I like it!
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