Till Eventide

I will abide till eventide
     Hoping once more you’ll come
I'll sing a song and skip along
     The wind my steps to guide

I’ll wink at stars and kiss the moon
     Pretending it's your face
I’ll lift my eyes to heaven’s grace
     And hope your coming’s soon

I’ll wonder here, I’ll wonder there
     Make all of nature sing
I’ll scatter glitter from my wing
     For you, I've much to spare

I’ll let my hair cascade and flow
    Let the breeze carry the scent
I’ll bask in moonbeams much content
    You’re coming, that I know

I will abide till eventide 
   For soon t’will be that time
When into loving arms I’ll climb
   And in your heart reside

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bordner Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 2:43 PM
Eventide is such an awesome word choice Eileen! "I'll scatter glitter from my wing, for you I have much to spare..." Romance with a hot sparkle, that's nice! I love how you finish this poem with a robust purr of affection. J.A.B.
Jr Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 12:21 PM
It's simply perfect & amazing !Your rhymes play nice melody in ears, you really are a master! your big fan,Moein
Brown Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Beautiful, elegant, lovely. Love your work Eileen! David
Gibson Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Eileen, this is beautiful...so light and full of loving expectation.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 10:02 AM
This piece is sublime Eileen. It felt like floating on a gentle breeze.
Chircop Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:02 PM
Isn't this a beauty? Ow yes Eileen..It would be nice if you could read it on Drake 's show..Its soo romantic girl.
Christensen Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Very sweet and romantic. I love the light sort of waltz like flow in this.
Tacito Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Gorgeous! Ahhh, a slow dance w/poetry & its honest roots. Shine on!
Manassian Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 1:57 PM
:) Slow dance...sweet sweet sweet! Hugs
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