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Till Death Do Us Part

As I look in your eyes And I realize how beautiful you are; Now I'm quite happy that time flies, Because together we can go far. From what we've been through Up until now standing across from you; When I'm with you there's nothing to lose, Because I bet you feel the same too. When I hand you the ring The ring that will make it forever; Even when times get tougher than you think, It will remind you that we're in this together. Having you in my life comforts me Knowing that we can be a family; Being with you definitely sets me free, But I cant forget to make you happy most importantly. I gladly take you to be my wife I'll protect you and guide your heart; To a place where you can be with me for life, And promise to be with you till death do us part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/15/2017 3:24:00 PM
Oh that is a lovely pledge for a wedding vows. Such a beautiful written poem. Have a nice day my friend Nick Nguyen. Nice to meet you.
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Nick Nguyen
Date: 10/15/2017 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Nice to meet you too. You have a wonderful day today. As you should everyday.
Date: 10/15/2017 9:45:00 AM
Great promise to your sweet lady, Nick:)
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Date: 10/14/2017 9:57:00 PM
1st view :) Love the rhythm and the message, nice job.
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