Til the Time Was Right

Was a kindly lady
Whose  biological clock was ticking down
Six times they tried IVF treatment
To have there own child is their crown

The fire of love still burns between them
It is hard for them to understand
Why their dearest wish isn't granted
Holding ones baby in your hands.

The face is slowly smiling
As she faces another scan
To say yea or nay that she's with child
Smiling face but very wan.

The radiologist puts gel on the bump
Listens intently for the sound she wants to hear
Turns the screen around , mothers heart jumps
There on the screen is their child to be

Deep down this sight, keeps my faith intact
Moves my very soul from darkness to light
Lord moves in mysterious ways
Making them wait til the  time was right.


Penned 09/06/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Seren,, I'm passing by to say hi, and thank you for the reply, you left on the comment I left below... XOX~ LINDA
Dey Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Love the lady you described...Congrats!
Roberts Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 3:37 PM
thank you so much Litan ....Seren
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June 25, 2014 at 8:22 PM
Congratulations, Seren on a well-deserved win, my friend!
Roberts Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Thank you Pandita...Seren
Mehta Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 5:00 AM
Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,
Roberts Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 5:06 AM
thanks Ram .....Seren
Callus Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:37 AM
Lovely! He serves those who patiently wait... and try and try! Congrats on your win. // paul
Roberts Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 5:07 AM
Hi Paul thanks for your comment ...Seren
A   Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 8:41 PM
SEREN.. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
Roberts Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 5:07 AM
thank you Linda
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