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Tight Pose

while harsh fingers of rain stencil the dusk

oak leaves chill in tight pose

yearning to climb heaven 

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written for ^ Rick Parise
One Tree Standing Contest

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Sara Kendrick

March 13, 2012 at 6:19 PM

Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

March 13, 2012 at 2:40 PM

congrats on your contest win nette; wonderful use of language, I love that first line! :-)

Kash Poet

March 13, 2012 at 11:46 AM

This is wonderful Nette!Congrats on your win.

Christopher Bunton

March 13, 2012 at 6:15 AM

Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 13, 2012 at 5:27 AM

Congratulations for your placement in this contest Nette. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

March 12, 2012 at 5:49 PM

I too love oaks! Congrad's Light & Love

Harry Horsman

March 12, 2012 at 4:58 PM

congrats to you nette, that first line is stunning, harry

Sashi Prabhu

March 10, 2012 at 11:10 AM

wow.. all the best for the contest.............`sashi

Joe Maverick

March 8, 2012 at 7:31 PM

Enjoyed the read and best wishes for the contest Nette..)

Andrea Dietrich

March 7, 2012 at 3:19 PM

This is good and eerie, Nette. i like it a lot. it is doing what kimo are supposed to do: create a moment frozen in time.

Sara Kendrick

March 7, 2012 at 2:34 PM

Great work that reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest..Interesting contest seems like...Thanks for the encouraging comments left at my work..Sara

Russell Sivey

March 7, 2012 at 1:07 PM

Wow, now this is a great write Nette! This is a fantastic display of awesome talent of which this poem does! I fabulously enjoyed the last line, "yearning to climb heaven" climbing it's way to the stars! I just love your write very much my friend! Excellent Work!!

Cyndi Macmillan

March 7, 2012 at 10:28 AM

Oh, this is just stunning---not one word would I change and ... well... I'm slack jawed! stencil dusk tight pose climb heaven!!!!! PERFECT! I want this number one. Still sick here.. had gotten better and then it came back worse. Chills and in my chest... thank goodness hubby is healthy and is helping as much as he can and 'our' girl is proving she's an angel after all and is being helpful to mommy. Thinking about you and hoping your allergies are improving. Blowing you a kiss, Cyndi

Jay Herman

March 7, 2012 at 7:39 AM

Nette, I like it. You have my vote. :-) Jay

Jslambert Mister Roboto

March 7, 2012 at 5:02 AM

I think we all need to get a piece of that rope that leads to the high skies of High Heaven, I like the purity u pack inside of this poem, well said, like bread, that's a "SEVEN" unleavened! (7 rate poem from me)