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Tight Pose

while harsh fingers of rain stencil the dusk oak leaves chill in tight pose yearning to climb heaven . ………. … written for ^ Rick Parise One Tree Standing Contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2012 6:19:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/13/2012 2:40:00 PM

congrats on your contest win nette; wonderful use of language, I love that first line! :-)

Kash Poet

Date: 3/13/2012 11:46:00 AM

This is wonderful Nette!Congrats on your win.

Christopher Bunton

Date: 3/13/2012 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/13/2012 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations for your placement in this contest Nette. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/12/2012 5:49:00 PM

I too love oaks! Congrad's Light & Love

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/12/2012 4:58:00 PM

congrats to you nette, that first line is stunning, harry

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/10/2012 11:10:00 AM

wow.. all the best for the contest.............`sashi

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/8/2012 7:31:00 PM

Enjoyed the read and best wishes for the contest Nette..)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2012 3:19:00 PM

This is good and eerie, Nette. i like it a lot. it is doing what kimo are supposed to do: create a moment frozen in time.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2012 2:34:00 PM

Great work that reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest..Interesting contest seems like...Thanks for the encouraging comments left at my work..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/7/2012 1:07:00 PM

Wow, now this is a great write Nette! This is a fantastic display of awesome talent of which this poem does! I fabulously enjoyed the last line, "yearning to climb heaven" climbing it's way to the stars! I just love your write very much my friend! Excellent Work!!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 3/7/2012 10:28:00 AM

Oh, this is just stunning---not one word would I change and ... well... I'm slack jawed! stencil dusk tight pose climb heaven!!!!! PERFECT! I want this number one. Still sick here.. had gotten better and then it came back worse. Chills and in my chest... thank goodness hubby is healthy and is helping as much as he can and 'our' girl is proving she's an angel after all and is being helpful to mommy. Thinking about you and hoping your allergies are improving. Blowing you a kiss, Cyndi

Jay Herman

Date: 3/7/2012 7:39:00 AM

Nette, I like it. You have my vote. :-) Jay

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/7/2012 5:02:00 AM

I think we all need to get a piece of that rope that leads to the high skies of High Heaven, I like the purity u pack inside of this poem, well said, like bread, that's a "SEVEN" unleavened! (7 rate poem from me)

David Williams

Date: 3/7/2012 1:02:00 AM

Nette I like were you took this one, well done , good luck..David

Kash Poet

Date: 3/7/2012 1:00:00 AM

Wait for my soupmail!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/7/2012 12:59:00 AM

Excellent imagery here Nette.A wonderful Kimo.Best wishes to you.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/7/2012 12:58:00 AM

OK....I am here!!