Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Tiger Lily Teases Daffodil

Tiger lily does yoga into the wind
Driving Daffodil crazy
He has loved her for days now

She bends and flecks, 
Her petals twinkle like leaves
She has no idea what she is doing to his libido

Daffodil stands as staunchly as possible
Trying to get her to notice
To no avail

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Swetha Vangaveti February 25, 2022 at 11:26 AM Only you can think of something like this Caren!! Caren Krutsinger February 25, 2022 at 12:23 PM Once it has been thought ot it must be executed onto a page

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2022 at 9:04 PM what inventive personification this is. Love it, Caren Caren Krutsinger February 25, 2022 at 12:23 PM Thank you Andrea

Sotto Poet February 24, 2022 at 7:20 PM Beautiful metaphor and personification of loving flowers, and very nice composition, dear Caren. Caren Krutsinger February 25, 2022 at 12:24 PM Thank you so much

Paulette Calasibetta February 24, 2022 at 2:34 PM Splendid imagery and personification of romantic flowers very sweet. :)Paulette Caren Krutsinger February 24, 2022 at 3:16 PM Thank you Paulette

L Milton Hankins February 24, 2022 at 11:50 AM These are really sweet tercets, Caren. I loved the idea of the flower's attraction for one another. Caren Krutsinger February 24, 2022 at 3:16 PM Thank you Hank

Jeff Kyser February 24, 2022 at 11:23 AM nice imagery there! Caren Krutsinger February 24, 2022 at 3:16 PM Thank you Jeff