Tier Full

Alone and locked up in her room
With mirrors reflecting her gloom
She paces the floor
And looks at the door
But can not crawl back in the womb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/9/2021 6:15:00 PM
This is hilarious!
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Date: 1/5/2021 4:25:00 PM
Hello Rico … it appears the room is now the womb - thanks Rico - Lindsay
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Date: 1/5/2021 3:24:00 PM
Her room will have to be her womb for the present --- until and unless it becomes her 'tomb.' What can one say?!
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Date: 1/4/2021 2:14:00 PM
you are so clever with titles, rico! this one is great! you make a great point about the womb. when you think about it, why would anyone ever want to leave there?
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Date: 1/4/2021 10:14:00 AM
Such a clever title and poem Rico, so many are suffering with depression and mental illness which has been exacerbated by the lockdown situation. Hold your head high with your poetry Rico, i will NEVER stop trying to raise a smile :-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2021 11:09:00 AM
got a couple of on lines friends who are expecting babies conceived by lockdown lol:-) Ielen is an amazing lady
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/4/2021 10:38:00 AM
This was inspired by one of Ilene's poems as I wondered why people despised being all alone in their room for 9-months when they coped quite well during 9-months in a womb. Thank you for your support! Aloha! Rico
Date: 1/4/2021 10:13:00 AM
Hi Rico, What a sad and deep and well-written Limerick. Happy New Year- Alexis
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/4/2021 10:39:00 AM
Too many tears and not enough Tiers! Aloha! Rico
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