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Tier Full

Alone and locked up in her room With mirrors reflecting her gloom She paces the floor And looks at the door But can not crawl back in the womb

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/9/2021 6:15:00 PM

This is hilarious!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/5/2021 4:25:00 PM

Hello Rico … it appears the room is now the womb - thanks Rico - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/5/2021 3:24:00 PM

Her room will have to be her womb for the present --- until and unless it becomes her 'tomb.' What can one say?!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/4/2021 2:14:00 PM

you are so clever with titles, rico! this one is great! you make a great point about the womb. when you think about it, why would anyone ever want to leave there?

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2021 10:14:00 AM

Such a clever title and poem Rico, so many are suffering with depression and mental illness which has been exacerbated by the lockdown situation. Hold your head high with your poetry Rico, i will NEVER stop trying to raise a smile :-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2021 11:09:00 AM

got a couple of on lines friends who are expecting babies conceived by lockdown lol:-) Ielen is an amazing lady

Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/4/2021 10:38:00 AM

This was inspired by one of Ilene's poems as I wondered why people despised being all alone in their room for 9-months when they coped quite well during 9-months in a womb. Thank you for your support! Aloha! Rico

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/4/2021 10:13:00 AM

Hi Rico, What a sad and deep and well-written Limerick. Happy New Year- Alexis

Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/4/2021 10:39:00 AM

Too many tears and not enough Tiers! Aloha! Rico