Tien a Christian Couplet Version

Where to go from here, when Truth is so near?
We all,may find the Son ,to light our way!

My Tien form is a sentence of ten words of one syllable, no title 

You may hear me recite my PS anthology on you tube undrr my pen name ichthyschiro

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Mcloughlin Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 10:49 AM
Thank you Brian. Regards, Jean
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January 6, 2016 at 10:31 AM
This is the first Tien Iv'e ever read Brian, it's wonderful! From Jean
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January 6, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Thks Jean, the form is derived from from Tichborne' Elegy.Check out here tomorrow for a demi sonnet 'love' sonnet tien that I will be posting.Better yet enter my fun activi ty on Karen O leary(former PS poet ) Whispersinthewind333.com.Rgds Brian
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