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Tied Hearts Go Together

Your hands Etched into the rigid grooves That line the ages of my face Go cold As my blood flows still. Frozen in a watery grave. It's funny How two souls can pass on Yet one still remain. Farewell Friend

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Date: 4/13/2025 8:39:00 PM
'How two souls can pass on Yet one still remain. Farewell Friend' filled with emotion, sadness envelops. powerful write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!
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Rebecca Kiser
Date: 4/14/2025 11:10:00 AM
Thank you so much friend. I deeply appreciate your encouraging words. God bless!
Date: 4/13/2025 9:34:00 AM
- Time ... a roaring tidal wave ... a heartbreaking poem, Rebecca - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Rebecca Kiser
Date: 4/14/2025 11:16:00 AM
Indeed - a roaring tidal wave whose waters can wreak damage we can choose to build anew, or let sit and rot into earth's dusty grave. Life is an interesting one. Thank you so much for your encouraging words! - best wishes

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