Tied For Shortest Story Ever

Broken promises
Makes noose
feels regret
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kaur Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 1:01 AM
Awesomely written in such small collection of words with a big deep meaning. Loved it. Thanks, Jagjot
Sietesantos Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Hi Xander, this is such a deep, powerful write. Well done in a few short lines! Best wishes.
Hyler Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
Lawless Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Sad, but all too frequent, event. Terse, succinct - makes one think.
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 5:36 AM
Very truthful work..Sara
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