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Tied for shortest story ever

Broken promises Makes noose feels regret

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 7/22/2014 1:01:00 AM
Awesomely written in such small collection of words with a big deep meaning. Loved it. Thanks, Jagjot
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Date: 7/15/2014 2:17:00 PM
Hi Xander, this is such a deep, powerful write. Well done in a few short lines! Best wishes.
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Date: 7/15/2014 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 7/15/2014 8:13:00 AM
Sad, but all too frequent, event. Terse, succinct - makes one think.
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Date: 7/15/2014 5:36:00 AM
Very truthful work..Sara
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