Tie Your Shoe

We could consume
Yes we can all eat
Atleast i would assume
And we're not very neat

So i invite all of you
To clean your room
Or maybe tie your shoe
Before it brings upon your doom

But it's more than that
I guess we need compassion 
So we differ from the simple rat
Not worried about looks and fashion

We can't get stuck in the same habit
We can't be held together by a posession
Can't do it until impossible to quit
And it drives us into depression 

Just as we all say 
But we never do
Let's brighten someone's day
Because thats up to you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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