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positivity in voice, mannerism, mollycoddling may bring tidings up from down-in-the-mouth to a weak grin if that doesn’t work perhaps, a little gin, olive plops, fizz fizz, a little sun, a little breeze wings flapping… just omitting, oblivious, staring straight ahead tethered to fair-weathered feathers, free-and-queasiness of tears 9/29/2021

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Date: 9/30/2021 2:56:00 PM
My plop plop fizz fizz is Alka Seltzer. Cute one Kim. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2021 4:09:00 PM
Thank you, Judy!
Date: 9/30/2021 5:18:00 AM
Would a dry martini be preferable? Like your fizz fizz. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2021 7:00:00 AM
My dad drinks martinis.

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