Tides

In moon's silent pull, Oceans breathe, a rhythm vast, Life sways in its dance. In tides' ebb and flow, we hear Nature's murmur, time's clasp.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/5/2024 1:36:00 AM

A melodious poem that makes me think of waves rushing to the shore.

Don Iannone
Date: 4/5/2024 2:55:00 AM

Thanks Victor. In a month, I shall see the shore! Don

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/4/2024 8:53:00 PM

Wonderful tanka, Don. I think you've hit on an excellent vehicle for your linguistic and literaturistic -- lovely word there -- talents. You are a master at these. Bravo, Gershon

Don Iannone
Date: 4/5/2024 2:54:00 AM

Thanks Gershon Indeed literaturustic! My forthcoming book is on the topic of American literature. Don